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jozsef1491

Feb. 22, 2022

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Books I have read

I was wondering what kind of book shall I read next time?Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot. Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read book is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology... I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live in another planet, I fell the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well. The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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Books I have read

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

Technically nothing wrong with your sentence, but it sounds better.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and t. The variety of thbooks I've read book is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live i. When I'm reading a book, I get the feeling that I am living on another planet,. I can felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/their thoughts as well.

Using the singular they (generic third person pronoun) is less clunky than his/her.

The last book I reafinished was the ""A Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but. I I think I will write about it in another journal :)

Nothing wrong with your sentence, but since you've used "read" in this entry a couple of times already, I opted for "finished" to avoid repetitiveness.

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jozsef1491

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you! I also would like to expres myself more in more variety

Books I have read

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I read is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology...

I enjoy reading books,. I have thea feeling duringwhile reading a book, that I totally live in another planet,. I felel the main charachter's motivation, and understand his/her thoughts as well.

The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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Good journal! Most of your mistakes tend to be spelling errors. But that's easy to fix over time! :-)

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jozsef1491

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you very much! I really would like to improve myself :)

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you -, dear journal reader -, I have read a lot.

Shall isn't wrong, but should sounds more natural.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand, and the variety of the read book is quite large:books that I read are numerous. Everything from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology.. are in my reading collection.

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live in another planet, I fell. When I am reading a book, I feel like I am living on another planet, totally immersed in the main charachter's motivation, ands well as understanding his/her thoughts as well.

The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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I really enjoyed reading your journal. Reading is a really nice hobby to have.

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jozsef1491

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you for your help! :)

I was wondering, what kind of book shall I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I've read is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book,and while reading a book I have the feeling that I totally live in another planet, I felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well.

The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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Great job! Keep it up :)

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jozsef1491

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thanks, I try to do my best! :)

Books I have read

I was wondering about what kind of book shall II will read next. time?Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I have read is quite large: from linguistics to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during. Whenever I reading a book, that II feel like I'm totally live iing on another planet, I felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well.

The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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jozsef1491

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thank you for your help! :)

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epistemophile

Feb. 24, 2022

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You're welcome :)

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I was wondering what kind of book shall I read next time?Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.


I was wondering about what kind of book shall II will read next. time?Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

I was wondering, what kind of book shall I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you -, dear journal reader -, I have read a lot.

Shall isn't wrong, but should sounds more natural.

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

I was wondering what kind of book shallould I read next time? Honestly, I have to tell you - dear journal reader - I have read a lot.

Technically nothing wrong with your sentence, but it sounds better.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read book is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology...


Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I have read is quite large: from linguistics to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I've read is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand, and the variety of the read book is quite large:books that I read are numerous. Everything from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology.. are in my reading collection.

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and the variety of the read bookbooks I read is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to Metro triology...

Actually, I always have a book somewhere in my bag or on my nightstand and t. The variety of thbooks I've read book is quite large: from linguistic to economics, from physics to religion, and from Victor Hugo to the Metro triology...

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live in another planet, I fell the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well.


I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during. Whenever I reading a book, that II feel like I'm totally live iing on another planet, I felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well.

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book,and while reading a book I have the feeling that I totally live in another planet, I felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/her thoughts as well.

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live in another planet, I fell. When I am reading a book, I feel like I am living on another planet, totally immersed in the main charachter's motivation, ands well as understanding his/her thoughts as well.

I enjoy reading books,. I have thea feeling duringwhile reading a book, that I totally live in another planet,. I felel the main charachter's motivation, and understand his/her thoughts as well.

I enjoy reading books, I have the feeling during reading a book, that I totally live i. When I'm reading a book, I get the feeling that I am living on another planet,. I can felel the main charachter's motivation and understand his/their thoughts as well.

Using the singular they (generic third person pronoun) is less clunky than his/her.

The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)


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The last book I read was the "Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but I think I will write about it in another journal :)

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The last book I reafinished was the ""A Coloumn of Fire" by Ken Follet, but. I I think I will write about it in another journal :)

Nothing wrong with your sentence, but since you've used "read" in this entry a couple of times already, I opted for "finished" to avoid repetitiveness.

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