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Last year, I had intended to read at least ten books. Unfortunately, I only read seven without counting mandatory reading for school. I think the problem is that I haven't found a specific genre or authors that I like.

For example, I really like The Terminal Man, by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him. I've read some books written by Stephen King, but I can't say I completely liked them, though I have to admit I haven't read some of the most famous ones. I also read all of John Green's books, but I don't enjoy other young adults books as much.

That's why I end up re-reading books, like I'm doing now with An Absolutely Remarkable Thing. I believe re-reading is just as important as reading and that you can get more from the book by doing so, but I would like to read something I haven't read before.

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Unfortunately, I only read seven withou(not counting mandatory reading for school.)

For example, I really liked The Terminal Man, by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him.

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This was very well written. The corrections I made weren't really for mistakes, as much as stylistic suggestions! Great job!

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Flan_girl

Jan. 5, 2021

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Thanks a lot!

Books

Last year, I had intended to read at least ten books.

"I had" is often written/said as "I'd".

Unfortunately, I only read seven, without counting mandatory reading for school.

I think the problem is that I haven't found a specific genre or authors(s) that I like.

For example, I really like d "The Terminal Man", by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him.

I've read some books written by Stephen King, but I can't say I completely liked them, though I have to admit I haven't read some of the most famous ones.

The "completely liked them" sounds a little awkward, you could say, "completely enjoyed them".

I also read all of John Green's books, but I don't enjoy other young adults books as much.

That's why I end up re-reading books, like I'm doing now with "An Absolutely Remarkable Thing".

I believe re-reading is just as important as reading and that you can get more from the book by doing so, but I would like to read something I haven't read before.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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Flan_girl

Jan. 5, 2021

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Thanks!

I also read all of John Green's books, but I don't enjoy other young adults books as much.


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Last year, I had intended to read at least ten books.


Last year, I had intended to read at least ten books.

"I had" is often written/said as "I'd".

Unfortunately, I only read seven without counting mandatory reading for school.


Unfortunately, I only read seven, without counting mandatory reading for school.

Unfortunately, I only read seven withou(not counting mandatory reading for school.)

I think the problem is that I haven't found a specific genre or authors that I like.


I think the problem is that I haven't found a specific genre or authors(s) that I like.

For example, I really like The Terminal Man, by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him.


For example, I really like d "The Terminal Man", by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him.

For example, I really liked The Terminal Man, by Michael Crichton, but I didn't like other books written by him.

I've read some books written by Stephen King, but I can't say I completely liked them, though I have to admit I haven't read some of the most famous ones.


I've read some books written by Stephen King, but I can't say I completely liked them, though I have to admit I haven't read some of the most famous ones.

The "completely liked them" sounds a little awkward, you could say, "completely enjoyed them".

That's why I end up re-reading books, like I'm doing now with An Absolutely Remarkable Thing.


That's why I end up re-reading books, like I'm doing now with "An Absolutely Remarkable Thing".

I believe re-reading is just as important as reading and that you can get more from the book by doing so, but I would like to read something I haven't read before.


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