March 15, 2023
I found this book by accident. It was on the sale shelf and cost a little bit more than two bucks. I saw the familiar cover, it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when.
I will start with a small description. The story is about a boy and girl, and they have cancer. They met each other in the support group. Augustus lose his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission. Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts, attacks of lug pain happened to her. It was love from the first sign for her. Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancer. This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazel a relationship. The support group gives every child who fights cancer a spatial opportunity, they perform one of the child's dreams. Augustus spent his dream for Hazel. They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and promised to tell her the sequel of her favorite book. During this trip he told her about his cancer return and that he has just several months before his death. It was an awful period for both of them. his condition became worth and worth. Nobody could expect Hazel will hurry her love. It is life and everything can happen.
If comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better. I am satisfied that I found this book and lived small life with these two guys in love.
Book review of: "The Fault In Our Stars".
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Nice work!
Book review for "The Fault In Our Stars".
I found this book by accident.
It was on the sale shelf and costed a little bit more than two bucks.
I saw thea familiar cover,; it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when.
I will start with a small description.
The story is about a boy and girl, and they have cancer.
They met each other in the cancer support group.
"support group" isn't normally used on its own, even if the context makes it clear for which topic the support group is for.
Augustus loset his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission.
Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts,e diagnosis-- attacks of lung pain happened toplagued her.
Worst - superlative (the most worse)
Worse - comparative (more bad than the other)
I think you meant diagnosis: the list and description of conditions/illnesses
"to plague" = to persistently bother and affect someone
It was love from the first signht for her.
Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancer.
This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazelfrom entering a relationship with Hazel.
The support group gives every child who fights cancer a spatecial (?) opportunity,: they performwill fulfill one of the child's dreams.
Augustus spent his dreamgiven opportunity for Hazel.
They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and promised to tell her the sequel of her favorite book.
During this trip he told her abouthat his cancer had returned and that he hasd just several months beforeuntil his death.
It was an awful period for both of them.
hHis condition became worthse and worthse.
Nobody one could expectask for Hazel willto hurry her love. (?)
Not sure about your intent here, but if "expect" was the right word, then the usage is "expect (someone) to do (something)"
"Nobody" and "no one" have the same usage, but "no one" is more formal and suited for this book review
It is life and everanything can happen.
IfWhen comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better.
I am satisfied that I found this book and lived small life with these two guys in love.experienced these two characters' love for a while. (?)
"guys" imply that they are both male. "guys" as an ungendered term is general and uncountable. Once you stay indicating the number of "guys," it implies that you are referring to males.
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I loved reading your opinion on this book! I read it a few years back and also found it touching. I agree with your commentary on everything-- the situation truly was terrible and the best experience from the book was seeing them love each other, despite the circumstances.
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They met each other in thea support group.
Augustus loset his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission.
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It was love from theat first signht for her.
This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazelfrom being in a relationship with Hazel.
The support group gives every child who fightsith cancer a spatecial opportunity, t. They perform one of the child's dreams.
During this trip he told her about his cancer retcurnrence and that he has just several months before his death.
hHis condition became worthse and worthse.
Nobody could expect Hazel willto hurry her love.
I am satisfied that I found this book and livedexperienced a small life with these two guysis couple in love.
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