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tina

Nov. 21, 2019

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I thought it's embarrassing myself swayed brand-oriented by those around me.

I am worry too much how people see.

It is important to be exposed English as usual since child who don't think like or dislike.

The difference is grace and you don't need fear. People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy.
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・世の中のブランド志向に流されていた自分が恥ずかしいと思った。

・人の目を気にしすぎる。

・好き嫌いのない子供の頃から当たり前のように英語に触れさせる事が大切です。

・違いは恵みであり、恐ることではない。多様性を楽しんでいる人は、とても楽しそう。

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Book quotes

You've given more than one quote. Number marking is compulsory in English, unlike Japanese (unless I misremembered something I read)

I thought it's embarrassing myselffelt embarrassed being swayed by brand-oriented by those around me. ¶

people around me.¶
[I felt embarrased being swayed by brands and people around me.]¶
[I felt embarrassed being influenced by brands (by advertising?).]

I don't really know what it means to be "brand-oriented" in this context (sounds like marketing jargon), I did my best to give better-sounding options.

I am worry too much how people see. ¶

about how other people see me. (how other people perceive me, what other people think of me)

It i's important to be exposed English as usual since child who don't think like or dislike. ¶
get regular exposure to English since childhood as children don't think in terms of likes and dislikes.¶
It's important for children to be be exposed to English regularly as their preferences have yet to form.

People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. ¶
happy.

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saimdusan

Dec. 9, 2019

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Sorry, I made a mistake. Instead of "It ' s important to be get regular exposure to English since childhood as children don't think in terms of likes and dislikes." it should be "It's important to get regular exposure to English from childhood as children don't think in terms of likes and dislikes."

People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. .

I am worrying too much how people see. ¶
perceive me.¶

It is important to be exposed to English as usual sincebecause a child who doesn't think either likes or dislike. ¶
s.¶

The difference is grace and you don't need fear.

People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. ¶
more happy.

I would say: those who enjoy diversity look more happy.

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Thanks for the interesting quotes

I am worry too much how people see.


I am worrying too much how people see. ¶
perceive me.¶

I am worry too much how people see. ¶

about how other people see me. (how other people perceive me, what other people think of me)

Book quote


Book quotes

You've given more than one quote. Number marking is compulsory in English, unlike Japanese (unless I misremembered something I read)

I thought it's embarrassing myself swayed brand-oriented by those around me.


I thought it's embarrassing myselffelt embarrassed being swayed by brand-oriented by those around me. ¶

people around me.¶
[I felt embarrased being swayed by brands and people around me.]¶
[I felt embarrassed being influenced by brands (by advertising?).]

I don't really know what it means to be "brand-oriented" in this context (sounds like marketing jargon), I did my best to give better-sounding options.

It is important to be exposed English as usual since child who don't think like or dislike.


It is important to be exposed to English as usual sincebecause a child who doesn't think either likes or dislike. ¶
s.¶

It i's important to be exposed English as usual since child who don't think like or dislike. ¶
get regular exposure to English since childhood as children don't think in terms of likes and dislikes.¶
It's important for children to be be exposed to English regularly as their preferences have yet to form.

The difference is grace and you don't need fear.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. .


People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. ¶
more happy.

I would say: those who enjoy diversity look more happy.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy. ¶
happy.

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