June 16, 2024
Book club
It was my first time visiting a book club yesterday. It was a specific book club because the organizer is a psychologist, and we discussed a psychological book. There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have spoken longer. The topic was "self-esteem." The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not depend on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etc.
Listening to different opinions was very interesting to me. I was excited to gain some new perspectives on this topic. Honestly, this topic is close to my heart. I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, but I'm working on it.
In my opinion, it was a great experience, and I plan to continue attending this club. The next topic for discussion is "relationships."
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It was my first time visiting a book club yesterday.
It was a specifical book club becaustoo, since the organizer is a psychologist, and we discussed a psychological book.
There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have spoken longer.
The topic was "self-esteem."
The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not depend on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etc.
Listening to different (OR: a variety of) opinions was very interesting to me.
I was excited to gain some new perspectives on this topic.
Honestly, this topic is close to my heart. OR this topic hits close to home
I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, butthough I'm working on it.
In my opinion, it was a great experience, and I plan to continue attending this club.
The next topic for discussion is "relationships."
June 17, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Book club
It was my first time visitattending a book club meeting yesterday.
It was a specific book club with a specific theme because the organizer is a psychologist, andso we discussed a psychologicaly book.
A psychology book is a book that has to do with psychology. A psychological book is more like a thriller
There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have spokenprobably gone on for a bit longer.
The topic was "self-esteem."
The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not dependnot on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etcand appearance.
Try not to use "etc." with "such as"
Listening to different opinions was very interesting to me.
I was excited to gain some new perspectives on this topic.
Honestly, this topic is close to my heart.
I have problems with my self-esteem asbecause external factors influence me too muchhave too much power over me, but I'm working on it.
In my opinion, it was a great experience, and I plan to continue attending this club.
The next topic for discussion is "relationships."
June 17, 2024
Thank you very much!
Book club
It was a specific book club for a specific genre because the organizer is a psychologist, andso we discussed about psychologicaly books.
Best to be more descriptive about it as calling it a "specific" book club can imply a lot of things (specific locations, contents, etc.)
There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although weit could have spokenlasted longer.
The topic was "self-esteem."
The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not depend on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etc.
LGetting to listening to different opinions was a very interesting experience to me.
I was excited to gain some new perspectives on this topic.
Honestly, (this topic ihits close to my heart.home) (I relate with this topic)
I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, but I'm working on it.
In my opinion, it was a great experience, and I plan to continue attending this club.
The next topic for discussion is "relationships."
June 17, 2024
Thank you very much for the corrections and clarifications!
Book club
It was my first time visitinggoing to a book club yesterday.
It was a specific book club because the organizer is a psychologist, and we discussed a psychological book.
There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have spoken longer.
The topic was "self-esteem."
The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not depend on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etc.
Listening to different opinions was very interesting to me.
I was excited to gain some new perspectives on this topic.
Honestly, this topic is close to my heart.
I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, but I'm working on it.
In my opinion, it was a great experience, and I plan to continue attending this club.
The next topic for discussion is "relationships."
June 17, 2024
Thank you!
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