Jan. 6, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - P22
At the same time constable Twitten and Inspector Steine are busy with the crime scene, Sergeant Brunswick and Masie are outside the hippodrome. While waiting in the queue for tickets, Brunswick notices a redhair cross the road and enter the hippdrome through a side door. Astonishing enough, he is not alarmed by the red hair itself, but finds suspicious how fast she was moving and the extra-large coat she was wearing. He looks down the street to see if someone is following her. For a while he stands there doing nothing; having already drunk three litres of alcohol, he may well not be at his sharpest. Moreover, should he try to walk away, Masie will be fuming at him. After wrestling with his thoughts, he resolved** on pursuing the redhair. A bizzare thought races through his mind, “Wait till I tell Twitten!” Does he actually want Twitten to be pleased with him? That is surely grounds for concern. Directed by Stage Door Albert, who incidentally is an informer run by Brunswick himself, he goes through to the dressing rooms. Walking along the corridor, he takes in the name badges on each door. He grows suspicious of Joanna Carver, who stages as the “Strong Woman.” She could well be the con redhair artist; in one of the witnesses reports was stated that a heavy bookcase had been moved. Besides, he smells explosive powder outside her room; he is certainly on to something. Unfortunately, he tries the door but it is closed. He then turns around and sees Professor Mesmer’s room. Still affected by the alcohol, he walks up to the door, knocks on it, ignores Mesmer say “Not now!”, and bursts in. After Professor Mesmor suitably asks “Who the hell are you?,” Sergeant Brunswick presents himself and enquire about the redhair.
*a redhair is suspected to have been carrying out break-ins.
**resolved or has resolved ?
Book - A Shot in the Dark - P22
At the same timWhile constable Twitten and Inspector Steine are busy with the crime scene, Sergeant Brunswick and Masie are outside the hippodrome.
While waiting in the queue for tickets, Brunswick notices a redhaired woman cross the road and enter the hippdrome through a side door.
Astonishing enough, he is not alarmed by the red hair itgirl herself, but finds suspicious how fast she was moving and the extra-large coat she was wearing.
He looks down the street to see if someone is following her.
For a while he stands there doing nothing; having already drunk three litres of alcohol, he may well not be at his sharpest.
Moreover, should he try to walk away, Masie will be fuming atrious with him.
After wrestling with his thoughts, he resolved** onsome hesitation, he makes up his mind to pursuinge the redhaired woman.
A bizzare thought races through his mind, “Wait till I tell Twitten!” Does he actually want Twitten to be pleased with himknow?
That is surely grounds for concern.
Directed by Stage Door Albert, who incidentally, is an informer run by Brunswick himself, he goes throughdirects Brunswick to go to the dressing rooms.
Walking along the corridor, he takes in the name badges on each door.
He grows suspicious of Joanna Carver, who stagesknown as the “Strong Woman.” She could well be the con artist with the red hair artist; in one of the witnesses reports it was stated that a heavy bookcase had been moved.
Besides, he smells explosive powder outside her room; he is certainly on to something.
Unfortunately, hHe tries the door but, unfortunately, it is closed.
He then turns around and sees Professor Mesmer’s room.
Still affected byunder the effects of the alcohol, he walks up to the door, and knocks on it,. He ignores Mesmer sayyell, “Not now!”, and bursts in.
After Professor Mesmor suitably asks “Who the hell are you?,” Sergeant Brunswick presents himself and enquires about the redhaired woman.
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At the same time constable Twitten and Inspector Steine are busy with the crime scene, Sergeant Brunswick and Masie are outside the hippodrome.
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While waiting in the queue for tickets, Brunswick notices a redhair cross the road and enter the hippdrome through a side door. While waiting in the queue for tickets, Brunswick notices a redhaired woman cross the road and enter the hippdrome through a side door. |
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Astonishing enough, he is not alarmed by the red hair itself, but finds suspicious how fast she was moving and the extra-large coat she was wearing. Astonishing enough, he is not alarmed by the |
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He looks down the street to see if someone is following her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For a while he stands there doing nothing; having already drunk three litres of alcohol, he may well not be at his sharpest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, should he try to walk away, Masie will be fuming at him. Moreover, should he try to walk away, Masie will be fu |
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After wrestling with his thoughts, he resolved** on pursuing the redhair. After |
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A bizzare thought races through his mind, “Wait till I tell Twitten!” Does he actually want Twitten to be pleased with him? A bizzare thought races through his mind, “Wait till I tell Twitten!” Does he actually want Twitten to |
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That is surely grounds for concern. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Directed by Stage Door Albert, who incidentally is an informer run by Brunswick himself, he goes through to the dressing rooms.
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Walking along the corridor, he takes in the name badges on each door. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He grows suspicious of Joanna Carver, who stages as the “Strong Woman.” She could well be the con redhair artist; in one of the witnesses reports was stated that a heavy bookcase had been moved. He grows suspicious of Joanna Carver, |
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Besides, he smells explosive powder outside her room; he is certainly on to something. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, he tries the door but it is closed.
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He then turns around and sees Professor Mesmer’s room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Still affected by the alcohol, he walks up to the door, knocks on it, ignores Mesmer say “Not now!”, and bursts in. Still |
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After Professor Mesmor suitably asks “Who the hell are you?,” Sergeant Brunswick presents himself and enquire about the redhair. After Professor Mesmor |
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*a redhair is suspected to have been carrying out break-ins. |
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**resolved or has resolved ? |
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