Jan. 5, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - P21
Part twentyone.
The story is purposely set in the present.
Police has immediately been called out to the crime scene; their response has strangely been quite prompt - they would be terribly wrong and rude those who would dare to accuse the Brighton Constabulary of negligence on the long-ago, notorious Middle Street Massacre. Arriving on the murder scene, Inspector Steine successfully employs his deductive skills to seize the situation: indeed, he accuses Twitten of making trouble, and instructs the three constables - who came along with him - to carry on with their work. It is reasonable to picture a dazed, dismal Twitten and three puzzled constable - they do not know what they should carry on with exactly- standing there in an awkward silence. Thankfully, Penny the actress appears from the stage and cry out ‘What’s happened here? Who’s that?’. While Steine’s attention is drawn else where, Twitten promptly seizes the chance to take the Aledersgate Stick-up list from Crystal’s hand* and slide it in his pocket. Turning back to Penny, he notices she looks upset. To relieve her, he explaines that she should not be in distress on the grounds of the victim being an irksome man, though being one of the greatest theatre critics. She realises he is talking of Crystal, and lets out a gasp of horror ‘Jack you didn’t...’. She then can bear no more of it, and faints on stage. Taken aback by all of this (this being his first day at the Brighton Constabulary), Twitten faints as well after apologising to Inspector Steine for doing so.
*Crystal being the murder victim.
Book - A Shot in the Dark - P21
Part twentyone.
The story is purposely set in the present.
The Police hasve immediately been called out to the crime scene; their response has strangely been quite prompt - they. It would be terribly wrong and rude those who wouldo dare to accuse the Brighton Constabulary of negligence due ton the long-ago, notorious Middle Street Massacre.
Police is an uncountable noun so have.
Arriving on the murder scene, Inspector Steine successfully employs his deductive skills to seize up the situation: i. Indeed, he accuses Twitten of making trouble, and instructs the three constables - who came along with him - to carry on with their work.
It is reasonable to picture a dazed, dismal Twitten and three puzzled constable - theys, who do not know what they should carry on with exactly-, standing there in an awkward silence.
Thankfully, Penny, the actress, appears from the stage and cryies out ‘, "What’s happened here?
Who’s that?’."
While Steine’s attention is drawn else where, Twitten promptly seizes the chance to take the Aledersgate Stick-up list from Crystal’s hand* and slides it into his pocket.
Turning back to Penny, he notices she looks upset.
To relievecomfort her, he explaines that she should not be in distress on the grounds ofthat the victim being an irksome man, although being one of the greatest theatre critics, was an irksome man, .
As he's dead best to talk about personality in past tense.
She realises he is talking ofabout Crystal, and lets out a gasp of horror ‘, "Jack, you didn’t...’."
She can then can bear it no more of it, and faints on stage.
Taken aback by all of this, (this being his first day at the Brighton Constabulary), Twitten faints as well after apologising to Inspector Steine for doing so.
Strange to apologise before you've done something involuntary.
*Crystal being the murder victim.
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Part twentyone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Police has immediately been called out to the crime scene; their response has strangely been quite prompt - they would be terribly wrong and rude those who would dare to accuse the Brighton Constabulary of negligence on the long-ago, notorious Middle Street Massacre. The Police ha Police is an uncountable noun so have. |
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Arriving on the murder scene, Inspector Steine successfully employs his deductive skills to seize the situation: indeed, he accuses Twitten of making trouble, and instructs the three constables - who came along with him - to carry on with their work. Arriving on the murder scene, Inspector Steine successfully employs his deductive skills to s |
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It is reasonable to picture a dazed, dismal Twitten and three puzzled constable - they do not know what they should carry on with exactly- standing there in an awkward silence. It is reasonable to picture a dazed, dismal Twitten and three puzzled constable |
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Thankfully, Penny the actress appears from the stage and cry out ‘What’s happened here? Thankfully |
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Who’s that?’. Who’s that? |
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While Steine’s attention is drawn else where, Twitten promptly seizes the chance to take the Aledersgate Stick-up list from Crystal’s hand* and slide it in his pocket. While Steine’s attention is drawn else |
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Turning back to Penny, he notices she looks upset. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To relieve her, he explaines that she should not be in distress on the grounds of the victim being an irksome man, though being one of the greatest theatre critics. To As he's dead best to talk about personality in past tense. |
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She realises he is talking of Crystal, and lets out a gasp of horror ‘Jack you didn’t...’. She realises he is talking |
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She then can bear no more of it, and faints on stage. She can then |
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Twitten, taken aback by all of this - this being his first day at the Brighton Constabulary - faints as well before apologising to Inspector Steine for doing so. |
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*Crystal being the murder victim. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The story is purposely set in the present. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Taken aback by all of this (this being his first day at the Brighton Constabulary), Twitten faints as well after apologising to Inspector Steine for doing so. Taken aback by all of this, (this being his first day at the Brighton Constabulary), Twitten faints as well after apologising to Inspector Steine for doing so. Strange to apologise before you've done something involuntary. |
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