June 22, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 88
The events of the last few days had unsettled Constable Twitten. He had come to discover Mrs Groynes’ real identity. The knowledge that she was the head of a criminal organisation—and not just a chatty cleaner in the police station—had become a burden to him. The young Constable felt out of his depth. It was his duty to bring her to justice, but he had no concrete evidence to go on. As far as Inspector Steine was concerned, Twitten was making up wild accusations. So for the foreseeable future, Mrs Groynes wasn’t going to be arrested. Twitten couldn’t bear the prospect of having to put up with her at work for the rest of his post in Brighton. The irony was that Mrs Groynes was the only person that understood Twitten, and Twitten was desperate enough to confided in her and seek her advice.
The events of the last few days had unsettled Constable Twitten.
He had come to discover Mrs Groynes’ real identity.
The knowledge that she was the head of a criminal organisation—and not just a chatty cleaner in the police station—had become a burden to him.
The young Constable felt out of his depth.
It was his duty to bring her to justice, but he had no concrete evidence to go on.
As far as Inspector Steine was concerned, Twitten was making up wild accusations.
So for the foreseeable future, Mrs Groynes wasn’t going to be arrested.
Twitten couldn’t bear the prospect of having to put up with her at work for the rest of his post in Brighton.
The irony was that Mrs Groynes was the only person that understood Twitten, and Twitten was desperate enough to confided in her and seek her advice.
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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 88 |
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The events of the last few days had unsettled Constable Twitten. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He had come to discover Mrs Groynes’ real identity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The knowledge that she was the head of a criminal organisation—and not just a chatty cleaner in the police station—had become a burden to him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The young Constable felt out of his depth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was his duty to bring her to justice, but he had no concrete evidence to go on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As far as Inspector Steine was concerned, Twitten was making up wild accusations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So for the foreseeable future, Mrs Groynes wasn’t going to be arrested. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Twitten couldn’t bear the prospect of having to put up with her at work for the rest of his post in Brighton. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The irony was that Mrs Groynes was the only person that understood Twitten, and Twitten was desperate enough to confided in her and seek her advice. The irony was that Mrs Groynes was the only person that understood Twitten, and Twitten was desperate enough to confide |
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