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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 78

Summary no. 78

In the hospital Ben Oliver was reading to Harry Jupiter one of his books, confident of jogging Jupiter’s memory. However, the man wasn’t paying any attention. He despised the boy for annoying him with something he had no recollection of whatsoever. So, when Deputy Chief Inspector Peplow of Scotland Yard burst into the room, causing Ben stop reading, Jupiter felt a sense of relief. Though, Peplow hadn’t been thoroughly filled in on Jupiter’s condition by the looks of it. In fact, he was stunned that Jupiter didn’t recognise him at all. So Oliver talked Peplow through what had happened to Jupiter. Of course Oliver didn’t fail to share the gossip as well; rumours had it that Inspector Steine was responsible for the incident. As soon as the name Steine was spoken, Peplow was hooked. The two of them loathed each other for a number of reasons, so Peplow saw these rumours as a great opportunty to exploit to his own advantage. He’d do anything to expose Steine for what he really was: an hopeless incompetent.

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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 78

Summary no.

78

In the hospital, Ben Oliver was reading to Harry Jupiter one of his books, confident of jogging Jupiter’s memory.

However, the man wasn’t paying any attention.

He despised the boy for annoying him with something he had no recollection of whatsoever.

So, when Deputy Chief Inspector Peplow of Scotland Yard bursted into the room, causing Ben to stop reading, Jupiter felt a sense of relief.

Though, Peplow hadn’t been thoroughly filled in on Jupiter’s condition by the looks of it.

In fact, he was stunned that Jupiter didn’t recognise him at all.

So Oliver talked Peplow through what had happened to Jupiter.

Of course Oliver didn’t fail to share the gossip as well; rumours had it that Inspector Steine was responsible for the incident.

As soon as the name Steine was spoken, Peplow was hooked.

The two of them loathed each other for a number of reasons, so Peplow saw these rumours as a great opportunty to exploit to his own advantage.

He’d do anything to expose Steine for what he really was: an hopeless incompetent.

"an" is used for vowels, like "a, e, i, o, u". If a word starts with these, when "a" is used, it would become "an"

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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 78


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In the hospital Ben Oliver was reading to Harry Jupiter one of his books, confident of jogging Jupiter’s memory.


In the hospital, Ben Oliver was reading to Harry Jupiter one of his books, confident of jogging Jupiter’s memory.

However, the man wasn’t paying any attention.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He despised the boy for annoying him with something he had no recollection of whatsoever.


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So, when Deputy Chief Inspector Peplow of Scotland Yard burst into the room, causing Ben stop reading, Jupiter felt a sense of relief.


So, when Deputy Chief Inspector Peplow of Scotland Yard bursted into the room, causing Ben to stop reading, Jupiter felt a sense of relief.

Though, Peplow hadn’t been thoroughly filled in on Jupiter’s condition by the looks of it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In fact, he was stunned that Jupiter didn’t recognise him at all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So Oliver talked Peplow through what had happened to Jupiter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Of course Oliver didn’t fail to share the gossip as well; rumours had it that Inspector Steine was responsible for the incident.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As soon as the name Steine was spoken, Peplow was hooked.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The two of them loathed each other for a number of reasons, so Peplow saw these rumours as a great opportunty to exploit to his own advantage.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He’d do anything to expose Steine for what he really was: an hopeless incompetent.


He’d do anything to expose Steine for what he really was: an hopeless incompetent.

"an" is used for vowels, like "a, e, i, o, u". If a word starts with these, when "a" is used, it would become "an"

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