May 30, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 77
Summary no. 77
Mrs Groynes was more and more on the verge of being exposed by Twitten’s findings. Although she thought it impossible that Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick would buy into any theory of Twitten’s, she took no risks. She intended to get all of them to the hippodrome show of the evening. Once there, Bobby Melma, a phrenologist as well as a member of her gang, would hypnotise Twitten on stage and get him to say, “Mrs Groynes is a wicked criminal.” She was sure no one would ever believe Twitten after that. Nevertheless, she first had to make sure to have all of them there. Twitten was the easiest because she had already had him abducted. As for Inspector Steine, she had to lure him there. She sat in the office opposite his, near enough for him to overhear her. She then pretended to have a call about a surprise event for Steine at the hippodrome. Sure enough, when she later asked him out to the hippodrome, he quickly said “yes”. Even a kid would be able to deceive Inspector Steine.
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 77
Summary no.
77
Mrs. Groynes was more and more on the verge of being exposed by Twitten’s findings.
Although she thought it was impossible that Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick would buy into any theory of Twitten’s, she took nowasn't going to take any risks.
She intended to get all of them to the hippodrome show of thethat evening.
Once there, Bobby Melma, a phrenologist as well as a member of her gang, would hypnotisze Twitten on stage and get him to say, “Mrs. Groynes is a wicked criminal".” She was sure no one would ever believe Twitten after that.
Nevertheless, she first had to make sure to have all of them there.
Twitten was the easiest because she had already had him abducted him.
As for Inspector Steine, she had to lure him there.
She sat in the office opposite of his, near enough for him to overhear her.
She then pretended to have a call about a surprise event for Steine at the hippodrome.
Sure enough, when she later asked him out to the hippodrome, he quickly said “yes”.
Even a kid would be able to deceive Inspector Steine.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
May 31, 2022
Thank you
May 31, 2022
Twitten was the easiest because she had already had him abducted him.
By "had him abducted" I meant that she had instructed some members of her gang to abduct Twitten
June 3, 2022
By "had him abducted" I meant that she had instructed some members of her gang to abduct Twitten
Oh, ok! In that case, the sentence would be, "Twitten was the esaiest because she already had had him abducted". Technically, the sentence that you'd written before would be right in this situation, but it just doesn't feel right to me.
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Mrs Groynes was more and more on the verge of being exposed by Twitten’s findings. Mrs. Groynes was more and more on the verge of being exposed by Twitten’s findings. |
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Although she thought it impossible that Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick would buy into any theory of Twitten’s, she took no risks. Although she thought it was impossible that Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick would buy into any theory of Twitten’s, she |
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She intended to get all of them to the hippodrome show of the evening. She intended to get all of them to the hippodrome show |
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Once there, Bobby Melma, a phrenologist as well as a member of her gang, would hypnotise Twitten on stage and get him to say, “Mrs Groynes is a wicked criminal.” She was sure no one would ever believe Twitten after that. Once there, Bobby Melma, a phrenologist as well as a member of her gang, would hypnoti |
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Nevertheless, she first had to make sure to have all of them there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Twitten was the easiest because she had already had him abducted. Twitten was the easiest because she had already had |
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As for Inspector Steine, she had to lure him there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She sat in the office opposite his, near enough for him to overhear her. She sat in the office opposite of his, near enough for him to overhear her. |
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She then pretended to have a call about a surprise event for Steine at the hippodrome. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even a kid would be able to deceive Inspector Steine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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