May 20, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 75
Summary no. 75
When constable Twitten woke up, he found himself bound in a flat position. He quickly realised that he was inside a cupboard in the police station—inside Inspector Steine’s office, to be precise. Though, he couldn’t remember how and why he had ended up there. But then it all gradually started to come back in clear details. He had come to uncover Mrs Groynes’ real identity all by himself. However, he hadn’t make it to report his astounding findings. Having been a step ahead of him all along, Mrs Groynes had lured him into a trap at the Albion Bank. After that it was all a blank.*
Astonishingly, Twitten gave no further thought to any of that, turning his attention to Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick. He wondered what they would make of him as a policeman. The prospect of those two reproaching him for having made some mistakes was unbearable. He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry, therefore, he couldn’t have made any mistakes at all.
*I meant that Twitten had no further memories.
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 75
Summary no.
75
When constable Twitten woke up, he found himself bound in a flat position.
He quickly realised that he was inside a cupboard in the police station—inside Inspector Steine’s office, to be precise.
Though, he couldn’t remember how and why he had ended up there.
But then it all gradually started to come back in clear details.
"detail" doesn't need to be plural here
He had come to uncover Mrs Groynes’ real identity all by himself.
However, he hadn’t makde it to report his astounding findings.
Having been a step ahead of him all along, Mrs Groynes had lured him into a trap at the Albion Bank.
After that, it was all a blank.
It sounds more natural to have a pause
Astonishingly, Twitten gave no further thought to any of that, turning his attention to Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick.
He wondered what they would make of him as a policeman.
The prospect of those two reproaching him for having made some mistakes was unbearable.
He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry, and therefore, he couldn’t have made any mistakes at all.
*I meant that Twitten had no further memories.
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wow, your english is amazing :)
May 20, 2022
Thank you very much
T--though, he couldn’t remember how and why he had ended up there.
You can stick this sentence at the end of the previous one. Just remove the period ( . ) and put another long dash (--) there instead.
But then it all gradually started to come back in clear details.
He had come to uncover Mrs Groynes’ real identity all by himself.
However, he hadn’t makde it to report his astounding findings.
Having been a step ahead of him all along, Mrs Groynes had lured him into a trap at the Albion Bank.
After that it was all a blank.
Astonishingly, Twitten gave no further thought to any of that, turning his attention to Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick.
He wondered what they would make of him as a policeman.
The prospect of those two reproaching him for having made some mistakes was unbearable.
He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry, therefore, he couldn’t have made any mistakes at all.
*I meant that Twitten had no further memories.
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Very good! Keep up the good work! :)
May 20, 2022
Thank you very much
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When constable Twitten woke up, he found himself bound in a flat position. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He quickly realised that he was inside a cupboard in the police station—inside Inspector Steine’s office, to be precise. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Though, he couldn’t remember how and why he had ended up there.
You can stick this sentence at the end of the previous one. Just remove the period ( . ) and put another long dash (--) there instead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But then it all gradually started to come back in clear details. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But then it all gradually started to come back in clear detail "detail" doesn't need to be plural here |
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He had come to uncover Mrs Groynes’ real identity all by himself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, he hadn’t make it to report his astounding findings. However, he hadn’t ma However, he hadn’t ma |
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Having been a step ahead of him all along, Mrs Groynes had lured him into a trap at the Albion Bank. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that it was all a blank. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After that, it was all a blank. It sounds more natural to have a pause |
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Astonishingly, Twitten gave no further thought to any of that, turning his attention to Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He wondered what they would make of him as a policeman. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The prospect of those two reproaching him for having made some mistakes was unbearable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry, therefore, he couldn’t have made any mistakes at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry |
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*I meant that Twitten had no further memories. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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