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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 64

Summary no. 64

Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, in particular what had let to it. Mrs Groynes explained that both planning and execution had been easily enough. All she had to was make sure no one would get out alive and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero. Twitten and Mrs Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him. Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was his own doing. The truth was that she had always exploited him. For example, she’d occasionally drop information, under the guise of idle chatter, about other criminals’ activity or whereabouts. Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs Groynes’ source. As she always expected him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter. And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.

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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 64

Summary no.

64

Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, in particular what had let to it.

Mrs. Groynes explained that both planning and execution had been easily enough.

All she had to do was make sure no one would get out alive and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero.

Twitten and Mrs. Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him.

Mrs/Mr requires a period after the last letter.

Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was his own doing.

The truth was that she had always exploited him.

May want to specify what woman you're referring to instead of the non-specific "she".

For example, she’d occasionally drop information, under the guise of idle chatter, about other criminals’ activity or whereabouts.

Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs. Groynes’ source.

As she always expected him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter.

And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs. Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.

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April 16, 2022

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Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, and in particular, what had letd to it.

Mrs. Groynes explained that both the planning and execution had been easily enough.

All she had to do was make sure no one would get out alive, and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero.

Twitten and Mrs. Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him.

Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was all his own doing.

Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs. Groynes’ source.

AJust as she always expected of him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter.

And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs. Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.

samu's avatar
samu

April 15, 2022

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Many thanks

Book - A Shot in the Dark - 64


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, in particular what had let to it.


Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, and in particular, what had letd to it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Mrs Groynes explained that both planning and execution had been easily enough.


Mrs. Groynes explained that both the planning and execution had been easily enough.

Mrs. Groynes explained that both planning and execution had been easily enough.

All she had to was make sure no one would get out alive and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero.


All she had to do was make sure no one would get out alive, and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero.

All she had to do was make sure no one would get out alive and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero.

Twitten and Mrs Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him.


Twitten and Mrs. Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him.

Twitten and Mrs. Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him.

Mrs/Mr requires a period after the last letter.

Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was his own doing.


Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was all his own doing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The truth was that she had always exploited him.


The truth was that she had always exploited him.

May want to specify what woman you're referring to instead of the non-specific "she".

For example, she’d occasionally drop information, under the guise of idle chatter, about other criminals’ activity or whereabouts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs Groynes’ source.


Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs. Groynes’ source.

Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs. Groynes’ source.

As she always expected him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter.


AJust as she always expected of him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.


And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs. Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.

And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs. Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.

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