March 28, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 59
Part no. 59
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense, therefore analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it.
The interview with Sergeant Brunswick has unsettled Penny. She’s afraid that she may have unconsciously said something that could put Bobby and her into trouble. She heads over to the hotel where Bobby is staying. When she enters his room, she immediately explains what has happened, without failing to stress that the police were in particular interested in Bobby. Much to Penny’s astonishment, Bobby demands to know exactly what the Police asked. The thought that Bobby might be involved in Jack’s murder has been nagging Penny for days. She can’t help but voice it now. He denies it with astounding coldness. Penny feels completely overwhelmed by the whole situation. She pours out all of her worries to Bobby, but he merely stares back at her emontionless. She pleads him to explain how he came to have a first hand knowledge of the crime scene. Bobby tries to talk his way out, but in the end emotions get the better of him. He admits to being a con artist and that he was with Jack on the night of the murder. However, Bobby stands by his earlier point: he didn’t kill Jack.
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense,; therefore, analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it.
The interview with Sergeant Brunswick has unsettled Penny.
She’s afraid that she may have unconsciously said something that could puget Bobby and her into trouble.
Or '...bring Bobby and her trouble.'
She heads over to the hotel where Bobby is staying.
When she enters his room, she immediately explains what has happened, without failing to stress that the police were in particular interested in Bobby.
Or 'particularly interested in Bobby'
Much to Penny’s astonishment, Bobby demands to know exactly what the Ppolice asked.
The thought that Bobby might be involved in Jack’s murder has been nagging Penny for days.
She can’t help but voice it now.
He denies it with astounding coldness.
Penny feels completely overwhelmed by the whole situation.
She pours out all of her worries onto Bobby, but he merely stares back at her, emontionless.
She pleads with him to explain how he came to have a first hand knowledge of the crime scene.
Bobby tries to talk his way out, but in the end his emotions get the better of him.
He admits to being a con artist and that he was with Jack on the night of the murder.
However, Bobby stands by his earlier point: he didn’t kill Jack.
March 29, 2022
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Book - A Shot in the Dark - 59 |
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This summary was deliberately written in the present tense, therefore analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it. This summary was deliberately written in the present tense |
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The interview with Sergeant Brunswick has unsettled Penny. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She’s afraid that she may have unconsciously said something that could put Bobby and her into trouble. She’s afraid that she may have unconsciously said something that could Or '...bring Bobby and her trouble.' |
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She heads over to the hotel where Bobby is staying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When she enters his room, she immediately explains what has happened, without failing to stress that the police were in particular interested in Bobby. When she enters his room, she immediately explains what has happened, without failing to stress that the police were in particular interested in Bobby. Or 'particularly interested in Bobby' |
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Much to Penny’s astonishment, Bobby demands to know exactly what the Police asked. Much to Penny’s astonishment, Bobby demands to know exactly what the |
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The thought that Bobby might be involved in Jack’s murder has been nagging Penny for days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She can’t help but voice it now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He denies it with astounding coldness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Penny feels completely overwhelmed by the whole situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She pours out all of her worries to Bobby, but he merely stares back at her emontionless. She pours out all of her worries onto Bobby, but he merely stares back at her, emo |
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She pleads him to explain how he came to have a first hand knowledge of the crime scene. She pleads with him to explain how he came to have |
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Bobby tries to talk his way out, but in the end emotions get the better of him. Bobby tries to talk his way out, but in the end his emotions get the better of him. |
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He admits to being a con artist and that he was with Jack on the night of the murder. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, Bobby stands by his earlier point: he didn’t kill Jack. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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