For me, my goal in learning English is justonly for basic communication. For me, my goal in learning English is only for basic communication.

You can say that it's only myjust a hobby and it can't bring me any profit. You can say that it's just a hobby and can't bring me any profit.

you can make it shorter, pretty good tho

You can say that it's only my hobby and it can't bring me any profit.more money. You can say that it's only my hobby and it can't bring me any more money.

SoTherefore, finding a person who can speak English is enough for my English learning. Therefore, finding a person who can speak English is enough for my learning.

Never start a sentence with so. You don't have to repeat English.

So finding a person who can speak English is enough for my English learning.sufficient for me. So finding a person who can speak English is sufficient for me.

In this case, why should I findget an English teacher whose lesson price is very high charges a lot for a lesson? In this case, why should I get an English teacher who charges a lot for a lesson?

Definitely, the lower, the better. Definitely, the lower the better.

Definitely, the lowThe lower the price for the teacher, the better.! The lower the price for the teacher, the better!

Not a complete sentence

In addition, speaking English does not depend on the teachers, but on the students, who need to practicse more by themselves. In addition, speaking English does not depend on the teachers, but on the students, who need to practise more by themselves.

Moreover, teachers don't need to speak too much during the class, they only need to ask me a few questions and once I speakif I say something wrong, tell me the right expressionsway to say it. Moreover, teachers don't need to speak too much during the class, they only need to ask me a few questions and if I say something wrong, tell me the right way to say it.

Moreover, teachers don't need to speak too much during the class, t. They only need to ask me a few questions and once I speak wrongif I make mistakes, tell me the right expressions. Moreover, teachers don't need to speak too much during the class. They only need to ask me a few questions and if I make mistakes, tell me the right expressions.

So why should I choose a teacher with a high price of lessonsn expensive teacher? So why should I choose an expensive teacher?

So why should I choose a teacher withho charges a high price ofor lessons? So why should I choose a teacher who charges a high price for lessons?

But for other people, if they are in a deadly need tof learning English well, for example, they have to use English to get promoted, pass exams, study abroad, do business, and all these things can bring them a lot of benefits, then only in that case... But for other people, if they are in deadly need of learning English well, for example, they have to use English to get promoted, pass exams, study abroad, do business, and all these things can bring them a lot of benefits, then only in that case...

"in need of" and then a noun. "He needs a book" = "He is in need of a book" "if" needs to be followed by "then" (literal or implied) in the same sentence.

But for other people, if they are in a deadlyurgent need to learn English well, for example, they have to use English to get promoted, pass exams, study abroad, do business, and all these things can bring them a lot of benefits, they should consider….. But for other people, if they are in a urgent need to learn English well, for example, they have to use English to get promoted, pass exams, study abroad, do business and all these things can bring them a lot of benefits, they should consider…..

This sentence is incomplete, I would combine it with the next sentence.

Only in this case, they should they consider hiring a good teacher with a high lesson price (in fact, high lesson price doesn't necessarily mean that the teacher has good teaching skills). Only in this case, they should consider hiring a good teacher with a high lesson price (in fact, high lesson price doesn't necessarily mean that the teacher has good teaching skills).

Only in this case, should they consider hiring a good teacher with a high lesson price (in factho charges more (however, high lesson pricecost doesn't necessarily mean that the teacher has good teaching skills). Only in this case, should they consider hiring a good teacher who charges more (however, high lesson cost doesn't necessarily mean that the teacher has good teaching skills).

At leastHowever for me, the cost of the lesson price is a key deciding factor forin signing up for online lessons. However for me, the cost of the lesson is a key deciding factor in signing up for online lessons.