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BOB

Bob lives in a small flat in London. In the mornings, he wakes up and has a shower. Then he makes breakfast. He usually has a typical English breakfast with eggs and bacon. After that, he goes to work.

He works in an office in the center of London. He sits in front of the computer all day and writes emails. He doesn't like his job very much, but he likes earning money. At 12 o'clock he goes to lunch and has a sandwich. After lunch, he comes back to work and writes more emails. At 5 o'clock he leaves work.

He sometimes sees his girlfriend in the evenings. She lives on the opposite side of London, so he takes the Underground.

On weekends, he doesn't have to work. He usually goes out for a few beers with his friends on Friday night. On Saturday he goes shopping. On Sunday he goes to his grandmother's house for tea.

On Monday he gets up early and goes back to work.


Bob vive en un departamento pequeño en Londres. En la mañana, el se levanta y toma una ducha. Prepara el desayun. Usualmente tiene un desayuno tipico ingles con huevos y bacon. Despues el va hacia el trabajo.

Trabaja en una oficina en el centro de londres. Se sienta en frente de la computadora todos el dia y escribe correos electronicos. No le gusta trabajar mucho, pero le gusta ganar dinero. A las 12 va a almorzar y se come un sanguche. Despues vuelve al trabajo y escribe mas correso electronicos. A las 5 sale del trabajo.

A veces ve a su novia en la noche. Ella vive en un departamento fuera de Londres, entonces el se toma un subte.

Los fin de semanas, no tiene que trabajar. Usualmente va afuera por algunas cervezas con sus amigos los viernes en la noche. El sabado va de compras. El domingo va hacia su casa de la madre por te.

Los lunes se levanta temprano y vuelve al trabajo

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In the mornings, he wakes up and hatakes a shower.

"In the mornings" isn't grammatically shocking, but it'd be more common to say "In the morning" in this context.

"Has a shower" is absolutely correct, but I changed it to "takes a shower" to match the tone.

He sometimes sees his girlfriend in the evenings.

Similar to my comment about "in the mornings" above, this is correct, but is probably more typically said "in the evening" as a general noun.

On weekends, he doesn't have to work.

Your sentence is perfect in American English. You started out using words like "flat" that suggest UK English.

US: "On weekends" or "On the weekend"
UK: "At the weekend"

Not a correction, just a stylistic note.

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Very well written with no true errors, just a few stylistic suggestions. The strongest one that stuck out to me was the blending of US and UK English. Either would be ok, but mixing them up can be a little destabilizing to a discerning reading. Truly no edits are absolutely needed for this to sound like the natural work of a native speaker (maybe someone in the US trying to sound British or vice-versa).

BOB

Bob lives in a small flat in London.

He sits in front of thea computer all day and writes emails.

At 12 o'clock he goes tofor lunch and has a sandwich.

Or, “…he has lunch. He has a sandwich.”

After lunch, he comgoes back to work and writes more emails.

She lives on the opposite side of London, so he takes the Underground.

Feedback

Great!

BOB


BOB

Bob lives in a small flat in London.


Bob lives in a small flat in London.

In the mornings, he wakes up and has a shower.


In the mornings, he wakes up and hatakes a shower.

"In the mornings" isn't grammatically shocking, but it'd be more common to say "In the morning" in this context. "Has a shower" is absolutely correct, but I changed it to "takes a shower" to match the tone.

Then he makes breakfast.


She lives on the opposite side of London, so he takes the Underground.


She lives on the opposite side of London, so he takes the Underground.

On weekends, he doesn't have to work.


On weekends, he doesn't have to work.

Your sentence is perfect in American English. You started out using words like "flat" that suggest UK English. US: "On weekends" or "On the weekend" UK: "At the weekend" Not a correction, just a stylistic note.

He usually goes out for a few beers with his friends on Friday night.


On Saturday he goes shopping.


On Sunday he goes to his grandmother's house for tea.


On Monday he gets up early and goes back to work.


He usually has a typical English breakfast with eggs and bacon.


After that, he goes to work.


He works in an office in the center of London.


He sits in front of the computer all day and writes emails.


He sits in front of thea computer all day and writes emails.

He doesn't like his job very much, but he likes earning money.


At 12 o'clock he goes to lunch and has a sandwich.


At 12 o'clock he goes tofor lunch and has a sandwich.

Or, “…he has lunch. He has a sandwich.”

After lunch, he comes back to work and writes more emails.


After lunch, he comgoes back to work and writes more emails.

At 5 o'clock he leaves work.


He sometimes sees his girlfriend in the evenings.


He sometimes sees his girlfriend in the evenings.

Similar to my comment about "in the mornings" above, this is correct, but is probably more typically said "in the evening" as a general noun.

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