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SummerTeaWater

June 28, 2021

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Board Games

Many board games are implemented as smart phone apps these days.

Chess, Go, Xiangqi, Mahjong, Othello and so on are possible to play.

On the plus side, these apps are so convenient to the player.

There is no need to prepare a board, stones and pieces to play.

Moreover, a user can play anywhere, anytime and with anyone.

But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.

Real things help me work out strategies.

And I can make other board games for my kids with pieces.

In the end, I will teach the games to my kids with real boards.

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Board Games

Many board games are implementedavailable as smart phone apps these days.

More natural: "mobile apps."

Chess, Go, Xiangqi, Mahjong, Othello and so on are possible to play.

Technically correct, but sounds quite awkward. I would actually combine this with the previous sentence:

Many board games are available as smartphone apps these days–chess, go, xiangqi, mahjong, Othello, and more.

On the plus side, these apps are so convenient tofor the player.

There is no need to prepare a board, stones and pieces to play.

Moreover, a user can play anywhere, anytime and with anyone.

But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.

Real thingPhysical objects help me work out strategies.

Or "using physical objects helps me..."

And I can make other board games for my kids with pieces.

In the end, I will teach the games to my kids with real boards.

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Yes, there's something really satisfying about a nice game board! Good writing. Keep it up.

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SummerTeaWater

June 30, 2021

402

Thank you very much!

Board Games

Many board games are implemented as smart phone apps these days.

Chess, Go, Xiangqi, Mahjong, Othello and so on are possible to play.

On the plus side, these apps are so convenient tofor the player.

There is no need to prepare a board, stones andor pieces to play.

Moreover, a user can play anywhere, anytime and with anyone.

But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.

Real things help me work out strategies.

And I can make other board games for my kids with pieces.

In the end, I will teach the games to my kids with real boards.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

June 30, 2021

402

Thank you for your help

Board Games


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Many board games are implemented as smart phone apps these days.


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Many board games are implementedavailable as smart phone apps these days.

More natural: "mobile apps."

Chess, Go, Xiangqi, Mahjong, Othello and so on are possible to play.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Chess, Go, Xiangqi, Mahjong, Othello and so on are possible to play.

Technically correct, but sounds quite awkward. I would actually combine this with the previous sentence: Many board games are available as smartphone apps these days–chess, go, xiangqi, mahjong, Othello, and more.

On the plus side, these apps are so convenient to the player.


On the plus side, these apps are so convenient tofor the player.

On the plus side, these apps are so convenient tofor the player.

There is no need to prepare a board, stones and pieces to play.


There is no need to prepare a board, stones andor pieces to play.

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Moreover, a user can play anywhere, anytime and with anyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.


But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.

But I think, it is better to player with a real board and pieces.

Real things help me work out strategies.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Real thingPhysical objects help me work out strategies.

Or "using physical objects helps me..."

And I can make other board games for my kids with pieces.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the end, I will teach the games to my kids with real boards.


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