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I think talking about English Learning Journey is kind of tricky. If I don't remember wrong, English was part of the curriculum starting from 6th grade in my time. It makes me learning more than 10 years and now I felt like old. It was started with school and later became the part of my life.

After all those years, to be honest there is no particular reason to learn. Mostly, it is the desire of becaming better. After 10 years and all the effort I put into, I just want to be better. Don't forget to add, able to read and watch alien media is another reason to learn English. Generally, I watched to shows, series, animes with English subtitles. I read to manga with english translation. Reading manga in Turkish is came to weird now.

Currently, I don't put a lot of effort and, because of that there is no progression in my fluency. Also, I really need work on my grammar.

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Thanks. I am afraid of to ask but, I tried to convey of the "non Turkish media" with using alien. Is it right?

After all those years, to be honest there is no particular reason to learn.


After all those years, to be honest there is no particular reason for me to learn. After all those years, to be honest there is no particular reason for me to learn.

Joining with Messy Writing to Challange


JI'm joining the challenge with Mmy messy Wwriting! to Challange I'm joining the challenge with my messy writing!

This sentence is explaining to everyone that you are joining the challenge while admitting you have messy writing.

I think talking about English Learning Journey is kind of tricky.


I think talking about my English Llearning Jjourney is kind of tricky. I think talking about my English learning journey is kind of tricky.

If I don't remember wrong, English was part of the curriculum starting from 6th grade in my time.


If I don't remember wrong, English was part of themy curriculum starting from 6th grade in my time. If I don't remember wrong, English was part of my curriculum starting from 6th grade.

It makes me learning more than 10 years and now I felt like old.


It makes me have been learning for more than 10 years and now I felt likel old. I have been learning for more than 10 years and now I feel old.

I feel (present tense) I felt (past tense)

It was started with school and later became the part of my life.


It was started with school and later became thea part of my life. It started with school and later became a part of my life.

Mostly, it is the desire of becaming better.


Mostly, it is the desire of becaoming better. Mostly, it is the desire of becoming better.

After 10 years and all the effort I put into, I just want to be better.


After 10 years and all the effort I put into it, I just want to be better. After 10 years and all the effort I put into it, I just want to be better.

it = english

Don't forget to add, able to read and watch alien media is another reason to learn English.


Don'tI forgeot to add, to be able to read and watch alien media is another reason for me to learn English. I forgot to add, to be able to read and watch alien media is another reason for me to learn English.

Generally, I watched to shows, series, animes with English subtitles.


Generally, I watched to shows, series, and animes with English subtitles. Generally, I watch shows, series, and animes with English subtitles.

I read to manga with english translation.


I read to manga with english translations. I read manga with english translations.

Reading manga in Turkish is came to weird now.


Reading manga in Turkish is came tofeels weird now. Reading manga in Turkish feels weird now.

Currently, I don't put a lot of effort and, because of that there is no progression in my fluency.


Currently, I don't put in a lot of effort and, b. Because of that, there is no progression in my fluency. Currently, I don't put in a lot of effort. Because of that, there is no progression in my fluency.

It sounds better with 2 sentences instead of 1.

Also, I really need work on my grammar.


Also, I really need to work on my grammar. Also, I really need to work on my grammar.

another option: Also, my grammar really needs work.

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