Dec. 21, 2021
Finally, everyone in my house is gone just me left.
I can do whatever I want.
My house isn’t small but when everybody is here.
All I can do is stay inside my room.
Now I can do whatever I want.
I don’t need to go to library, gym…
I can do all that in this house and no one will in my way.
That is the best charismas present I get!
I can have my home back!
Finally, everyone in my house is gone just m's gone from my house, and I'm the only one left.
Finally, everyone's gone from my house, and I'm the only one left.
I can do whatever I want.
My house isn’t small butexcept for when everybody is here.
My house isn’t small except for when everybody is here.
All I can do is stay inside my room.
NBut now I can do whatever I want.
But now I can do whatever I want.
"but" contrasts with the previous sentence better.
I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym… I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym…
I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way. I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way.
That is the best charismas present I could ever get! That is the best charismas present I could ever get!
"best present I could ever ask for" is another expression one can use here.
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Very nicely done :)
I can have my home backthe house to myself!
I have the house to myself!
Finally, everyone in my house is gone jusbut me left.
Finally, everyone in my house is gone but me.
Or you could say,
My family (or whoever is living with you) finally left, and I'm home alone.
My house isn’t small, but when everybody is hereome, all I can do is stay in my room.
My house isn’t small, but when everybody is home, all I can do is stay in my room.
It wasn't a complete sentence.
All I can do is stay inside my room.
I've added this to the other sentence to make it a complete sentence.
I don’t need to go to the library, gym…the gym, etc.
I don’t need to go to the library, the gym, etc.
I can do all thatose things in this house, and no one will be in my way.
I can do all those things in this house, and no one will be in my way.
That is the best chaChristmas present I get've received!
That is the best Christmas present I've received!
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Nice job! Just made some changes to correct the grammar.
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My house isn’t small but when everybody is here.
My house isn’t small, but when everybody is h It wasn't a complete sentence.
My house isn’t small |
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All I can do is stay inside my room.
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I can have my home back!
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Finally, everyone in my house is gone just me left.
Finally, everyone in my house is gone Or you could say, My family (or whoever is living with you) finally left, and I'm home alone.
Finally, everyone |
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I can do whatever I want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I can do whatever I want.
"but" contrasts with the previous sentence better. |
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I don’t need to go to library, gym…
I don’t need to go to the library, I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym… I don’t need to go to the library, or the gym… |
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I can do all that in this house and no one will in my way.
I can do all th I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way. I can do all that in this house and no one will get in my way. |
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That is the best charismas present I get!
That is the best That is the best charismas present I could ever get! That is the best charismas present I could ever get! "best present I could ever ask for" is another expression one can use here. |
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