Feb. 5, 2025
I'm trying to use this website for diary the first time today. I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night . And yesterday I met some people who first time I met, and talking about bit difficult things. So, my brain exhausted.
for me, English practice is kind of like meditation. So now my mental feels relaxing and kind of like go to another place. second language bring me out to another place.
Outside getting rainy, so I realized why I am so sleepy
今日初めてこのサイトを日記を書くのに使ってみている。今週は夜遊びに行きすぎたので、今日は一日中眠かった。それに昨日は初めて会う人たちとちょっと難しい話をしたので、脳が疲れすぎてる感じがする。
私にとって英語を練習するのはメディテーションに似ている。だから今はリラックスしていて、別の場所に行ったみたいな気分。第二言語は私を別の場所に連れて行ってくれる。
外は雨が降りはじめて、だから眠いんだなと思った。
I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.
I'm trying to use this website as a diary for the first time today.
I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at nightthe entire day today, because I hungout at night too much this week .
I was so sleepy the entire day today, because I hungout at night too much this week .
And yesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and talkingwho talked a bit about bit difficult things.
And yesterday I met some people for the first time who talked a bit about difficult things.
So, my brain was exhausted. So, my brain was exhausted.
Alternate: So, I was mentally exhausted.
fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
For me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
So now, my mentalind feels relaxinged and kind of likeI want to go to another place.
So now, my mind feels relaxed and I want to go to another place.
A second language brings me out to another place. A second language brings me out to another place.
Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside. I realized, so that's why I am so sleepy.
It's starting to rain outside. I realized, so that's why I am so sleepy.
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English study for a rainy day. English study for a rainy day.
I'm trying to use this website foras a diary for the first time today.
I'm trying to use this website as a diary for the first time today.
I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night .out with my friends in the evening a lot.
I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went out with my friends in the evening a lot.
And yesterday I met some new people who first time I met, and talkinged about bitsome difficult things.
And yesterday I met some new people and talked about some difficult things.
So, my brain I am mentally exhausted.
So I am mentally exhausted.
fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
For me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
So now my mentalind feels relaxinged and I would kind of like to go to another placsomewhere.
So now my mind feels relaxed and I would kind of like to go to somewhere.
Practicing a second language bring me out to anothertakes me to different place.
Practicing a second language takes me to different place.
You could add 'in my mind' if the place isn't real. Or 'Practicing a second language puts me in a different mental state'.
Outside getIt's starting to rainy, so outside and I realized why I am so sleepy.
It's starting to rain outside and I realized why I am so sleepy.
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Amazing writing! :)
Today for the first time I'm trying to useout this website for my diary the first time today.
Today for the first time I'm trying out this website for my diary.
I was so sleepy all day today cuzbecause this week I went tout too much hangoutoften at night .
I was so sleepy all day today because this week I went out too often at night.
"Cuz" is internet slang and not used in formal writing.
And yYesterday I met some people whofor the first time I met, and, but they were talking about bit difficult thingopics.
Yesterday I met some people for the first time, but they were talking about difficult topics.
In a prompt, its helpful to explain a bit further if you mention that they discussed "difficult" or "controversial" topics.
So, my brain exhausted.
So my brain exhausted.
fFor me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
For me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
Make sure the sentence starts with a capitalized letter.
So now my mental feels relaxinged and I kind of like go to another place.
So now my mental feels relaxed and I kind of go to another place.
Be careful not to include filler words like "like" in a written statement.
A second language brings me out to another place mentally.
A second language brings me to another place mentally.
Outside gettingis rainy, sothat's when I realized why I am so sleepy.
Outside is rainy, that's when I realized why I am so sleepy.
Be careful about punctuation. Also its unclear what the association is between the weather outside and feeling sleepy.
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English study for rainy day. English study for a rainy day. English study for a rainy day. |
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I'm trying to use this website for diary the first time today.
Today for the first time I'm trying
I'm trying to use this website
I'm trying to use this website |
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And yesterday I met some people who first time I met, and talking about bit difficult things.
In a prompt, its helpful to explain a bit further if you mention that they discussed "difficult" or "controversial" topics.
And yesterday I met some new people
And yesterday I met some people |
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So, my brain exhausted.
So
So So, my brain was exhausted. So, my brain was exhausted. Alternate: So, I was mentally exhausted. |
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for me, English practice is kind of like meditation.
Make sure the sentence starts with a capitalized letter.
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So now my mental feels relaxing and kind of like go to another place.
So now my mental feels relax Be careful not to include filler words like "like" in a written statement.
So now my m
So now, my m |
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second language bring me out to another place.
A second language brings me
Practicing a second language You could add 'in my mind' if the place isn't real. Or 'Practicing a second language puts me in a different mental state'. A second language brings me out to another place. A second language brings me out to another place. |
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Outside getting rainy, so I realized why I am so sleepy
Outside Be careful about punctuation. Also its unclear what the association is between the weather outside and feeling sleepy.
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I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went to too much hangout at night .
I was so sleepy all day today "Cuz" is internet slang and not used in formal writing.
I was so sleepy all day today cuz this week I went
I was so sleepy |
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