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Oct. 23, 2025

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My sheep

I spoke a bit about my farm's house.
But I very want to wrote more things about my sheep, Noemie.
First time i came on the sheepfold, this little sheep came towards me.
She stayed behind me and she looked at me without interruption.
It was like she fall in love with me.
She followed me everywhere.
And if I were away from here, she saw me and came immediatly.
I could play with her to jump sheep (Maybe it's not the same game in english, it's when you jump over someome.)
And I was the only person who could approch her babies.
Still today, I don't know why she loved me like that.
Sometimes, I miss her.
I always have a teddy bear with her earring, because sheep were marked with that.
(it's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name : it's like a teddy bear but with a sheep form.)

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Nov. 4, 2025

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She followed me everywhere.

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She followed me everywhere.

Sometimes, I miss her.

Still today, I don't know why she loved me like that.


StillEven today, I still don't know why she loved me like that. Even today, I still don't know why she loved me like that.

Still toTo this day, I don't know why she loved me like thatso much. To this day, I don't know why she loved me so much.

Sometimes, I miss her.


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Sometimes, I miss her sometimes. I miss her sometimes.

You can write “sometimes” first, but it sounds more natural to put the verb first for involuntary things like feeling emotions.

I always have a teddy bear with her earring, because sheep were marked with that.


I always have a teddy bear withsheep doll wearing her earring with me, because sheep here were marked with that. I always have a sheep doll wearing her earring with me, because sheep here were marked with that.

(to resolve your query from the next chunk)

I always have a teddy bearcarry with me a stuffed sheep with her earrin tag, because sheep were marked withdomestic sheep commonly wear thatem. I always carry with me a stuffed sheep with her ear tag, because domestic sheep commonly wear them.

I’m not entirely sure I translated this correctly, but I think so. I don’t get the chance to talk about this sort of thing in English very often!

(it's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name : it's like a teddy bear but with a sheep form.)


(iIt's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name : i. It's like a teddy bear but within the form of a sheep form.) (It's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name. It's like a teddy bear in the form of a sheep.)

We often say “stuffed animal” or the name of the animal, like “stuffed sheep.”

(it's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name : it's like a teddy bear but with a sheep form.) (it's not a teddy bear, but I don't know the name : it's like a teddy bear but with a sheep form.)

"Plush(ie)" or "stuffed animal" are the most common terms that are separate to the specific animal, but honestly words for things that babies often use have a lot of regional variation so there's a lot of other words that get used too. (Not saying only babies have plushies, just that they have a lot of names because babies often have them) "Teddy bear" also sometimes gets used for ones that aren't bears too, though some people will also say that's wrong

My sheep


My sSheep My Sheep

My sSheep My Sheep

I spoke a bit about my farm's house.


I had previously spoken a bit about my farm's house. I had previously spoken a bit about my farm's house.

I spoke a bit about my farm's house. I spoke a bit about my farmhouse.

I spoke a bit about my farm's house. I spoke a bit about my farmhouse.

But I very want to wrote more things about my sheep, Noemie.


But I verreally want to wroite more things about my sheep, Noemie. But I really want to write more things about my sheep, Noemie.

But I verreally want to wroite more things about my sheep, Noemie. But I really want to write more about my sheep, Noemie.

But I verreally want to wroite more things about my sheep, Noemie. But I really want to write more things about my sheep, Noemie.

"wrote" is past tense, but when you're talking about things you want to do (but haven't done yet), then that want is talked about in the future tense.

First time i came on the sheepfold, this little sheep came towards me.


FThe first time i came onI went to the sheepfold, this little sheep came towards me. The first time I went to the sheepfold, this little sheep came towards me.

By writing "little sheep", I am assuming that you encountered Noemie when she was already an adult; otherwise, it is clearer to use "lamb" instead.

FThe first time i came on the sheepfoldI went up to the pen, this little sheep came towardsup to me. The first time I went up to the pen, this little sheep came up to me.

“Sheepfold” is a really interesting word! Sadly, it’s extremely rare in English. This was actually the first time I ever heard it!

FThe first time i came onI went to the sheepfold farm, this little sheep came towards me. The first time I went to the sheep farm, this little sheep came towards me.

"sheepfold" is _very_ old fashioned. Unless you're writing this from the sheep farm, it's better to talk about going there.

She stayed behind me and she looked at me without interruption.


She stayed behind me and she looked at me without uninterruptionedly. She stayed behind me and looked at me uninterruptedly.

She stayed behind me and she looked at me without interruptiontared straight at me. She stayed behind me and stared straight at me.

It was like she fall in love with me.


It was like she faell in love with me. It was like she fell in love with me.

It was like she faell in love with me. It was like she fell in love with me.

It was like she faell in love with me. It was like she fell in love with me.

"fell" is the past tense of "fall". Since we're talking about the sheep in the past, it should be past tense.

She followed me everywhere.


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And if I were away from here, she saw me and came immediatly.


And if I were away from here, she saw me and came immediatly. And if I were away from here, she saw me and came immediatly.

Okay... this part is a little confusing. Did you intend to talk about how Noemie reacted during the subsequent times you visited her sheepfold? Or how she behaved whenever she could not see you? Or something else?

And if I were away from hereIf I came back after being away, she saw me and came up to me immediately. If I came back after being away, she saw me and came up to me immediately.

And if I werent away from there, she saw me and came immediately. And if I went away from there, she saw me and came immediately.

I could play with her to jump sheep


I could play with her to jump sheepby leapfrogging over her. I could play with her by leapfrogging over her.

(to address your implied question from the next chunk)

I could play with her to jump sheepleap-frog with her. I could play leap-frog with her.

I could play with her to jump, like jumping over sheep I could play with her, like jumping over sheep

(Maybe it's not the same game in english, it's when you jump over someome.)


(Maybe it's not the same game in eEnglish, i. It's when you jump over someomne.) (Maybe it's not the same game in English. It's when you jump over someone.)

We call it “leap-frog!” This is a good phrase to ask about: we use it as a metaphor sometimes too!

(Maybe it's not the same game in eEnglish, it's when you jump over someomne.) (Maybe it's not the same game in English, it's when you jump over someone.)

And I was the only person who could approch her babies.


Andlso, I was the only person who could approach her babies. Also, I was the only person who could approach her babies.

And I was the only person who could approach her babies. I was the only person who could approach her babies.

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