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Dec. 16, 2025

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if only LIly chose Snape !

Seatting long and boring hours on the lessons of Potions, Charms, Transfiguration or Herbology I often think about something more interesting.

For example what could happen if Lily chose Snape instead of James Potter.
I think it could be a really nice story of relations - inspiring, strong and emotional.
The story when one and one gives much more when two separate things.
It could might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he become softer aand more positive .
May be the whole atmosphere in Hogwarts could be different, more ositive and less bullying.
May be then Professor Snape could be more loyal to Dumbledore and play on his side in the fight against Voldemort.
MAy be James Potter would chosen another personal journey without Lily.
Who knows? So many possible variants.. I am not a great exert in all those "feelings and connections".

What? What did you say Professor? Not, I am not dreaming again , Professor
I just gave my eyes s a little rest. Such an interesting lecture today!

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if only LIly chose Snape !


iIf only LIily chose Snape ! If only Lily chose Snape !

Seatting long and boring hours on the lessons of Potions, Charms, Transfiguration or Herbology I often think about something more interesting.


Seaitting through long and boring hours on thef lessons ofn Potions, Charms, Transfiguration or Herbology, I often think about something more interesting. Sitting through long and boring hours of lessons on Potions, Charms, Transfiguration or Herbology, I often think about something more interesting.

For example what could happen if Lily chose Snape instead of James Potter.


For example what could have happened if Lily had chosen Snape instead of James Potter. For example what could have happened if Lily had chosen Snape instead of James Potter.

The hypothetical is in the past, so it's "what could have happened" If it still has to happen / hasn't happened yet, then it's "what would happen / could happen if we did ..."

I think it could be a really nice story of relations - inspiring, strong and emotional.


I think it could behave been a really nice story of relations - inspiring, strong and emotional. I think it could have been a really nice story of relations - inspiring, strong and emotional.

The story when one and one gives much more when two separate things.


TheA story when one and one, when put together, gives much more whethan two separate things. A story when one and one, when put together, give much more than two separate things.

It could might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he become softer aand more positive .


It could might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he might have become softer aand more positive . It might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he might have become softer and more positive.

But Lily would’ve become Lily Snape, bringing her into the Snape family, not Severus into the Potter family. Then maybe their son, Harry Snape, would’ve turned out like Draco Malfoy. :-)

It could might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he may have become softer aand more positive . It might have brought Snape into the Potter family and he may have become softer and more positive .

May be the whole atmosphere in Hogwarts could be different, more ositive and less bullying.


May be the whole atmosphere in Hogwarts cwould have been different, more positive and with less bullying. Maybe the whole atmosphere in Hogwarts would have been different, more positive and with less bullying.

"Maybe" is one word

May be then Professor Snape could be more loyal to Dumbledore and play on his side in the fight against Voldemort.


May be then Professor Snape cwould behave been more loyal to Dumbledore and play on his side in the fight against Voldemort. Maybe then Professor Snape would have been more loyal to Dumbledore and play on his side in the fight against Voldemort.

MAy be James Potter would chosen another personal journey without Lily.


MAy aybe James Potter would chosenhave found another personal journey without Lily. Maybe James Potter would have found another personal journey without Lily.

"choosing a journey" doesn't sound quite right.

Who knows?


So many possible variants..


I am not a great exert in all those "feelings and connections".


I am not a great expert in all those "feelings and connections". I am not a great expert in all those "feelings and connections".

What?


What did you say Professor?


Not, I am not dreaming again , Professor


Not, I am not dreaming again , Professor Not, I am not dreaming again, Professor

I just gave my eyes s a little rest.


I just gave my eyes s a little rest. I just gave my eyes a little rest.

Such an interesting lecture today!


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