I just havehave just read a post on Instagram about suicide. I have just read a post on Instagram about suicide.

This guy wrote how he safeved a life a year ago. This guy wrote how he saved a life a year ago.

"Safe" is an adjective, but "save" is a verb

This guy wrote about how he safeved a life a year ago. This guy wrote about how he saved a life a year ago.

There was a man, who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life. There was a man who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life.

You don't need the comma there.

There was a man, who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life. There was a man who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life.

But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him. But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him.

But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him. But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him.

And he started to reflect on how a little change in our plans can do a huge change in our lifves or someone else's life. And he started to reflect on how a little change in our plans can do a huge change in our lives or someone else's life.

And he started to reflect on how a little change in our own plans can docreate a huge change in our lifves or someone else's life. And he started to reflect on how a little change in our own plans can create a huge change in our lives or someone else's life.

This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide. This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide.

This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide. This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide.

So now I'm wondering how this man endsed up so close to his death, and how many things had happened to him to make him want to do that. So now I'm wondering how this man ended up so close to his death, and how many things had happened to him to make him want to do that.

How dark and strong were his thoughts to lead him to that point.? How dark and strong were his thoughts to lead him to that point?

A question mark is better suited to end the sentence because you are asking a question.

And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to can stop them to play with my mind. And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I can stop them with my mind.

And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to stop them to play withfrom controlling my mind. And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to stop them from controlling my mind.

They feed themselves with my insecurities, mistakes, regrets, and even my wishes. They feed themselves with my insecurities, mistakes, regrets, and even my wishes.

In those moments life seems to me so horrible to me. In those moments life seems so horrible to me.

Your sentence structure was just a little bit off.

In those moments life seems to me so horrible to me. In those moments life seems so horrible to me.

Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is of torturing me, they abandoned me and leftave me empty, tired, and dry. Then, when these thoughts do their part of torturing me, they abandon me and leave me empty, tired, and dry.

You need to make sure that the sentence tense is consistent.

Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is torturing me, they abandoned me and left me empty, tired, and dry. Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is torturing me, they abandon me and left me empty, tired, and dry.

Just keeping everything in the same tense

Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors whom no one wants, but in any case, they come anyway. Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors whom no one wants, but they come anyway.

Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors who no one wants but in any case, the comecome anyway. Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like annoying visitors who no one wants but come anyway.

The problem is that these onethoughts can take you to your death. The problem is that these thoughts can take you to your death.

You need to make your antecedents clear.

The problem is that these onethoughts can take you to your death. The problem is that these thoughts can take you to your death.

A death, that maybe you cwould regret (or maybe not) . A death, that maybe you would regret (or maybe not) .

A death, that maybe you could regret or maybe will no t. A death, that maybe you could regret or maybe will not.

A death that leaves broken hearts and thatbehind because no one understandsood or expected it. A death that leaves broken hearts behind because no one understood or expected it.

A death that leaves broken hearts and that no one understands or expecteds. A death that leaves broken hearts that no one understands or expects.

The trick is that this death is beingmoves slowly and silently waved in our heads. The trick is that death moves slowly and silently in our heads.

The trick is that this death is being slowly and silently waved in our heads. The trick is that death is being slowly and silently waved in our heads.

I wishhope thise man from the bridge is doing ok :)ay. I hope the man from the bridge is doing okay.

I wishhope thise man from the bridge is doing okay :) I hope the man from the bridge is doing okay :)