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Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid, We went to a restaurant its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador, It's was not bad, then we went to shoping center and I bougth a face cream and that's all bye.

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Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,.

We went to a restaurant.

itIt’s name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, w.” We ate typical food from Ecuador,.

It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

My second time, writing ion this site.

Well tToday, I went to Madrid with my parents to Madrid,.

We went to a restaurant

its name isIt's called the "La sagrada familia" restaurant, and we ate typical food from Ecuador,

It's was not bad, t. Then (after) we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

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Very nicely written! :)

MThis is my second time, writing ion this site.

You can use what you learned yesterday as a model for this sentence.

Well tToday, I went with my parents to Madrid,

itsWe went to a restaurant name isd "La sSagrada fFamilia," restaurant,and we ate typical food from Ecuador,

Also good:
We went to a restaurant named "La Sagrada Familia " where we ate typical food from Ecuador.

It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center, and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

One idea = one sentence. This is a good way to organize your writing as a beginner.

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Good job! Keep practicing.

My second time, writing in this site.

Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,

We went to a restaurant

its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador,

only the name is fine.

It's was not bad, then we went to shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and that's all bye.

My second time, writing in this site.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

MThis is my second time, writing ion this site.

You can use what you learned yesterday as a model for this sentence.

My second time, writing ion this site.

Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well tToday, I went with my parents to Madrid,

Well tToday, I went to Madrid with my parents to Madrid,.

Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,.

We went to a restaurant


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We went to a restaurant.

its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador,


its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador,

only the name is fine.

its name isIt's called the "La sagrada familia" restaurant, and we ate typical food from Ecuador,

itsWe went to a restaurant name isd "La sSagrada fFamilia," restaurant,and we ate typical food from Ecuador,

Also good: We went to a restaurant named "La Sagrada Familia " where we ate typical food from Ecuador.

itIt’s name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, w.” We ate typical food from Ecuador,.

It's was not bad, then we went to shoping center and I bougth a face cream and that's all bye.


It's was not bad, then we went to shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and that's all bye.

It's was not bad, t. Then (after) we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center, and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

One idea = one sentence. This is a good way to organize your writing as a beginner.

It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.

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