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Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid, We went to a restaurant its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador, It's was not bad, then we went to shoping center and I bougth a face cream and that's all bye.
Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,.
We went to a restaurant.
itIt’s name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, w.” We ate typical food from Ecuador,.
It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That'’s all, bye.
My second time, writing ion this site.
Well tToday, I went to Madrid with my parents to Madrid,.
We went to a restaurant
its name isIt's called the "La sagrada familia" restaurant, and we ate typical food from Ecuador,
It's was not bad, t. Then (after) we went to a shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.
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Very nicely written! :)
MThis is my second time, writing ion this site.
You can use what you learned yesterday as a model for this sentence.
Well tToday, I went with my parents to Madrid,
itsWe went to a restaurant name isd "La sSagrada fFamilia," restaurant,and we ate typical food from Ecuador,
Also good:
We went to a restaurant named "La Sagrada Familia " where we ate typical food from Ecuador.
It's was not bad, t. Then we went to a shopping center, and I bougtht a face cream and t. That's all, bye.
One idea = one sentence. This is a good way to organize your writing as a beginner.
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Good job! Keep practicing.
My second time, writing in this site.
Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid,
We went to a restaurant
its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador,
only the name is fine.
It's was not bad, then we went to shopping center and I bougtht a face cream and that's all bye.
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My second time, writing in this site. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
You can use what you learned yesterday as a model for this sentence. My second time, writing |
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Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid, This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Well today, I went with my parents to Madrid |
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We went to a restaurant This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! We went to a restaurant. |
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its name is "La sagrada familia" restaurant, we ate typical food from Ecuador, its name is "La sagrada familia" only the name is fine.
Also good: We went to a restaurant named "La Sagrada Familia " where we ate typical food from Ecuador.
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It's was not bad, then we went to shoping center and I bougth a face cream and that's all bye. It's was not bad, then we went to shopping center and I boug It It One idea = one sentence. This is a good way to organize your writing as a beginner. It |
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