There isare a lot of things that you can do to be that person who you want to be , but I will tell you about them in three words There are a lot of things that you can do to be that person who you want to be, but I will tell you about them in three words

There isare a lot of things that you can do to be that person who want to be , but I will tell you about them in three wordsphrases: There are a lot of things that you can do to be that person who want to be, but I will tell you about them in three phrases:

words->phrases is a small nitpick since "Ask someone who has a good experience" isn't a single word. You could also shorten that part to "Ask", and then it would be three words :P

Ask someone who has a good experience. Ask someone who has experience.

Ask someone who has a good experience. Ask someone who has good experience.

Other alternatives: "someone who has experience", "someone with experience", "someone experienced" "having experience" is different from "having an experience" - the 'an' makes the experience singular, like it's a one-time event. If someone "has a good experience", that means they had a positive/enjoyable time with something. If someone "has good experience", that means they've experienced many things, and they're well-versed/knowledgeable.

Now I will begin to explain (to you) what I mean Now I will begin to explain (to you) what I mean

Now I will begin to explain to you what I mean. Now I will begin to explain to you what I mean.

Read about whatthe fileld you want to joinbecome better in. Read about the field you want to become better in

Why reading?! Why reading?

The exclamation mark (!) makes the line sound a little too excited/potentially aggressive - just a question mark (?) sounds more natural here

Because it will opening your mind toward to muchs new information you doidn't know it before . Because it will open your mind towards new information you didn't know before .

Tense

Practice what you learning from the college andague or other person. Practice what you learn from the colleague or other person.

Past tense

Practice what you learning from the college and other personople. Practice what you learn from college and other people.

And ask them if you don't get any information wrong or you don't know how can you deal with it .for new information, feedback, or anything else And ask them for new information, feedback, or anything else

The last one, after you've built your mind and your knowledge too , then search for someone who works in the same jobfield you want to work on it in. The last one, after you've built your knowledge, then search for someone who works in the same field you want to work in.

TAs for the last one, after you've built your mind andup your knowledge too , then, you should search for someone who works in the same jobfield you want to work on it in. As for the last one, after you've built up your knowledge, you should search for someone who works in the same field you want to work in.

"As for [...]" makes the change in subject a little clearer. For overall clarity you could maybe also consider a format like "Read: [explanation] Practice: [explanation] Ask: [explanation]"

And if they will help you . And if they will help you.