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abc90377

July 13, 2024

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Bluetooth headphone

Today, when I was on the bus, I saw a Bluetooth headset box was left between the gap of two seats. I should have taken it out and given it to the driver, but instead, I ignored it. I regret this a bit now and hope the owner eventually got it back.

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Bluetooth headphones

Headphones almost always has an "s" on it.

Today, wWhen I was on the bus today, I saw a Bluetooth headset box was left between the gap of two seats.

Sounds more natural, less poetic.

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abc90377

July 15, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Bluetooth headphones

Today, when I was on the bus, I saw a Bluetooth headset box that was left between the gap of two seats.

I should have taken it out and given it to the driver, but instead, I ignored it.

I regret this a bit now and hope the owner eventually got it back.

abc90377's avatar
abc90377

July 15, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Bluetooth headphone


Bluetooth headphones

Bluetooth headphones

Headphones almost always has an "s" on it.

Today, when I was on the bus, I saw a Bluetooth headset box was left between the gap of two seats.


Today, when I was on the bus, I saw a Bluetooth headset box that was left between the gap of two seats.

Today, wWhen I was on the bus today, I saw a Bluetooth headset box was left between the gap of two seats.

Sounds more natural, less poetic.

I should have taken it out and given it to the driver, but instead, I ignored it.


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I regret this a bit now and hope the owner eventually got it back.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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