Feb. 6, 2023
Hello all,
I appreciate your kind help in editing the below e-mail:
"When you treat people in a very decent way as a gentleman, you should expect to be treated in the same way. This is life, what you did, should be received in the same way or even better.
Everyone is entirely free to block a connection among his connections on Twitter but he should be careful that this freedom shouldn't harm other moraly especially if this person has done you no wrong. That's exactly what you did, you exercised your right in freedom, and you significantly shocked me for nothing I did.
Given your profession as a professor, I sought your advice in how to get a postgraduate degree, how to be involved in the community, the cost of living in KSA how it might be.
-Is such a question considered an offence to you?!! Did I get your feeling hurt?
-Isn't that our religion urges us to help each other "Allah help those whoever help brother in his need"?!
-Have I wronged you when I dealt with you in an extreme courtesy?
-Has it occurred to you that blocking my account could have caused this unpleasant surprise to me?
For a while, I thought that I got a mentor or advisor who can give me advice from his firsthand experience especially when you previously showed high morals and that you invited me to meet in my next trip to KSA. I wish that you were the person, I thought you were.
It was fortunate that I get to know a respectful person such as you but what is really unfortunate is that our intial acquaintance would end up this way on the grounds of misunderstanding or maybe thinking badly of me and that you didn't take my inquiries seriously.
I guess I have to appreciate your desire and my own desire is to remain having much respect to a succefull and respectful person such as you."
Hello (Y'all, everyone, you all)
You can say "you all' "everyone" or "y'all" which is short for "you all".
I appreciate your kind help in editing the below e-mail:e-mail below, it is very kind of you.
This can be past-tense, but it's a correct sentence! I rearranged some words to make it sound more natural, though using the order I put isn't required.
"When you treat people in a very decent way as a gentlemankind way, you should expect to be treated in the same way.
"very decent" could be changed to "kind" or "good" to make it sound more natural. Also, people usually don't say "gentleman", though it's not bad to say it! I hope you don't mind my corrections to make the sentence sound more natural. Please know that your sentence is correct! It only sounds unnatural.
This is life, w! What you did, should be received in the same way, or even better.
The "!" could also be a "." since the "!" is to add emotion or emphasis.
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That's exactly what you did, y. You exercised your right inthis freedom, and youit significantly shocked me for, since I did nothing I didwrong.
Given your profession as a professor, I sought your advice in how to get a postgraduate degree, how to be involved in the community, the cost of living in KSA, and how it might be.
-Is such a question considered an offence to you?!!
Did I gehurt your feeling hurts?
-IDoesn't that our religion urges us to help each other; "Allah, help those whoever help a brother in his need"?
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-Have I wronged you when I dealt with you in an extreme courtesy?
-Has it occurred to you that blocking my account could have caused this unpleasant surprise to me?
For a while, I thought that I got a mentor or advisor who can give me advice from his firsthand experience, especially when you previously showed high morals and that you invited me to meet in my next trip to KSA.
I wish that you were the person, I thought you were.
It was fortunate that I get to know a respectful person such as you, but what is reallit's very unfortunate is that our initial acquaintance would end up this way; on the grounds of misunderstanding, or maybe you thinking badly of me, and that you didn't take my inquiries seriously.
I guess I have to appreciate your desire and m. My own desire, however, is to remain having much respect to a successfull and respectful person such as you."
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It's good and makes sense, though there's a few grammar mistakes. Good job, though! I'm sorry if I corrected anything wrong, I'm new to this website.
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Hello all, Hello (Y'all, everyone, you all) You can say "you all' "everyone" or "y'all" which is short for "you all". |
I appreciate your kind help in editing the below e-mail: I appreciate your This can be past-tense, but it's a correct sentence! I rearranged some words to make it sound more natural, though using the order I put isn't required. |
"When you treat people in a very decent way as a gentleman, you should expect to be treated in the same way. "When you treat people in a "very decent" could be changed to "kind" or "good" to make it sound more natural. Also, people usually don't say "gentleman", though it's not bad to say it! I hope you don't mind my corrections to make the sentence sound more natural. Please know that your sentence is correct! It only sounds unnatural. |
This is life, what you did, should be received in the same way or even better. This is life The "!" could also be a "." since the "!" is to add emotion or emphasis. |
Everyone is entirely free to block a connection among his connections on Twitter but he should be careful that this freedom shouldn't harm other moraly especially if this person has done you no wrong. Everyone is entirely free to block |
That's exactly what you did, you exercised your right in freedom, and you significantly shocked me for nothing I did. That's exactly what you did |
Given your profession as a professor, I sought your advice in how to get a postgraduate degree, how to be involved in the community, the cost of living in KSA how it might be. Given your profession as a professor, I sought your advice in how to get a postgraduate degree, how to be involved in the community, the cost of living in KSA, and how it might be. |
-Is such a question considered an offence to you?!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Did I get your feeling hurt? Did I |
-Isn't that our religion urges us to help each other "Allah help those whoever help brother in his need"? - |
! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
-Have I wronged you when I dealt with you in an extreme courtesy? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
-Has it occurred to you that blocking my account could have caused this unpleasant surprise to me? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
For a while, I thought that I got a mentor or advisor who can give me advice from his firsthand experience especially when you previously showed high morals and that you invited me to meet in my next trip to KSA. For a while, I thought that I got a mentor or advisor who can give me advice from his firsthand experience, especially when you previously showed high morals and that you invited me to meet in my next trip to KSA. |
I wish that you were the person, I thought you were. I wish |
It was fortunate that I get to know a respectful person such as you but what is really unfortunate is that our intial acquaintance would end up this way on the grounds of misunderstanding or maybe thinking badly of me and that you didn't take my inquiries seriously. It was fortunate that I get to know a respectful person such as you, but |
I guess I have to appreciate your desire and my own desire is to remain having much respect to a succefull and respectful person such as you." I guess I have to appreciate your desire |
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