Jan. 19, 2022
Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.
Today is my 305th journal writing every day, so I was worried if I couldn't write my today's journal.
In the notification message, I wasn't the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.
When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should help others' sentences more than 1300 comments.
For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.
Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction comment.
With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, then it is possible to write a new journal now.
Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.
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Today is my 305th journal writing(time, or day) writing in my journal every day, so I was worried ifthat I couldn't write my today's journal.
1. In the first part, you can say "writing journals every day", "journaling every day"...There are many ways to say this part :) "journal writing" is also okay (if you mean it like journal-writing), but in that case you can just say "journaling".
2. "write my today's journal" (X) sounds a bit unusual. You can say: "write today's journal", "write my journal for the day", or "write my journal today" ("today" in the last one is an adverb, not an adjective)
In the notification message, it said I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.
When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I shwould have to help others' sentences through more than 1300 comments.
I think you mean that to reach that ratio, you must make 1300 comments, right? I changed "should" to "would have to" because it makes that more clear in my opinion.
For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.
Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which werehad no correction comment.
With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, thenso it is possible for me to write a new journal now.
I added "for me" because I think it sounds better, but it is okay to omit it.
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Good writing skills! And wow, you wrote a lot of comments!! I'm happy you were able to post your 305th journal!
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Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.
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In the notification message, I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) needed to write a new journal.
When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should helphave corrected others' sentences more than 1,300 commenttimes.
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Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.
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Overall, there are minor grammar mistakes here and there, which I corrected to sound more natural. Also, I didn't know there was such a rule on this website.
Congratulations on your 305th day of writing your journal! Great work! :)
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Today is my 305th day of daily journal writing every day, so I was a little worried ifthat I couldn't write my today's journal.
Just reworded a bit to sound more natural and less clunky.
In tThe notification message, I wasn't said that I didn't have the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.
When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I shouldhave helped others' sentences more than 1300 commenttimes.
You mentioned in the previous sentence that you just saw the notification, so you don't have to state it again in this sentence.
ForTo increasinge the ratio, I tried to write comments on older sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.
"In order to increase the ratio" can also work here.
Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction commenthat have not been corrected yet.
With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, thenand it is possible to write a new journal now.
Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.
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잘 했습니다! Also, I didn't know that there is a minimum correction ratio! Now I know ㅋㅋㅋ. Thank you for writing about this today. :)
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For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.
"In order to increase the ratio" can also work here.
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