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shoupunk

Nov. 20, 2021

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I stayed in front of my keyboard during at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.
I still have no idea.
Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ? No originality but it's important to say hello.

So, hi, I'm new. But then ?

I'm here to practise, I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug. Just because "rug" is one of this words I still remember even if I never use them. Like wrinkle or platypus.
Its a rectangular purple rug. My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment. I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour. I don't even like rugs, too difficult to clean . Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

Corrections

I stayed in front of my keyboard duringfor at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I still have no idea.

Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ?

No originality but it's important to say hello.

So, hi, I'm new.

But then ?

I'm here to practisce, so I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug.

Just because "rug" is one of thise words I still remember even if I never use them.

Like wrinkle or platypus.

Its a rectangular purple rug.

My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment.

I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour.

I don't even like rugs, they're too difficult to clean .

Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

Feedback

We don't have a space after a word, and before a punctuation mark. Eg; if? (good) if ? (nope!)

It's nothing major, but something to remember :)

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shoupunk

Nov. 20, 2021

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I didn't know about the punctuation mark thank you !

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Janie

Nov. 20, 2021

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You just did it! Haha!

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shoupunk

Nov. 26, 2021

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Yeah... I just did it! You say haha in english? We say ahah in french :)

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Janie

Nov. 27, 2021

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I also say aha or ahah! Keep up your studies and let me know if you have any questions :)

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I stayed in front of my keyboard during at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.


I stayed in front of my keyboard duringfor at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I still have no idea.


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Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

No originality but it's important to say hello.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, hi, I'm new.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But then ?


But then ?

I'm here to practise, I need to find something to write.


I'm here to practisce, so I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just because "rug" is one of this words I still remember even if I never use them.


Just because "rug" is one of thise words I still remember even if I never use them.

Like wrinkle or platypus.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Its a rectangular purple rug.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't even like rugs, too difficult to clean .


I don't even like rugs, they're too difficult to clean .

Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?


Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

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