Dec. 19, 2021
Black Panther
My superhero name is Black Panter. He's 32 year old, he have black costume,black hair and blue eyes. He was born in Afrika. His weapons are claws, smoke bombs and he is also super strong, he can transform into black panter and he's super fast.
The main enemy of Black Panter is Thanos. Black Panter is protecting stones of infinity gauntlet from Thanos. With that gauntlet and all stones, Thanos can destroy all world just by snapping with his fingers. Baron Zemo, Erik Kilmoger, Achebe and Ulysses Klaue are aslo his enemys. His alter ego is that he live in Manhattan in New York City, with his family into his house.
His friends are Avengers, Black panters,Leopards and many other animals. He is born to protect world from dangerous creaturos, Thanos and other enemys. He's proverb is „Wakanda forever“!
My superhero name is Black Panter.
Did you mean "my favorite superhero's name"?
He's 32 year old, he haves a black costume, black hair and blue eyes.
Black Panter is protecting the stones of infinity gauntlet from Thanos.
With that gauntlet and all the stones, Thanos can destroy all the world just by snapping with his fingers.
Baron Zemo, Erik Kilmoger, Achebe and Ulysses Klaue are aslso his enemys.
His alter ego is that he lives in Manhattan in New York City, with his family, into his house.
He is born to protect the world from dangerous creaturoes, Thanos and other enemyies.
He's proverbcatchphrase is „Wakanda forever“!
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Very good!
You seem to have some trouble with definite articles, so I suggest you read a bit about it here: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/grammar/english-grammar-reference/the-definite-article-the
Dec. 19, 2021
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Black Panther |
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My superhero name is Black Panter. My superhero name is Black Panter. Did you mean "my favorite superhero's name"? |
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He's 32 year old, he have black costume,black hair and blue eyes. He's 32 year old, he ha |
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He was born in Afrika. |
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His weapons are claws, smoke bombs and he is also super strong, he can transform into black panter and he's super fast. |
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The main enemy of Black Panter is Thanos. |
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Black Panter is protecting stones of infinity gauntlet from Thanos. Black Panter is protecting the stones of infinity gauntlet from Thanos. |
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With that gauntlet and all stones, Thanos can destroy all world just by snapping with his fingers. With that gauntlet and all the stones, Thanos can destroy all the world just by snapping |
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Baron Zemo, Erik Kilmoger, Achebe and Ulysses Klaue are aslo his enemys. Baron Zemo, Erik Kilmoger, Achebe and Ulysses Klaue are a |
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His alter ego is that he live in Manhattan in New York City, with his family into his house. His alter ego is that he lives in Manhattan in New York City, with his family, in |
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His friends are Avengers, Black panters,Leopards and many other animals. |
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He is born to protect world from dangerous creaturos, Thanos and other enemys. He is born to protect the world from dangerous creatur |
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He's proverb is „Wakanda forever“! He's |
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