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sachisachi

Nov. 15, 2024

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I have black hair, so I always dye my hair light brown.

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red it gradually fades over time.

The color all disappears in three weeks and gets back to light brown.

I have long hair that reaches to middle of my back.

One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

I mean half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.

I liked it, but my hair got damaged a lot, so since then I haven't tried it.

The other day, I tried changing my hair color into black using an photo editing app.

It looked pretty cool.

I wonder black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.


私は、黒髪です、だからいつも明るい茶色の髪に染めています。

時々赤で染めたりします。でも赤で染めた場合は、時間とともにだんだん色あせてしまいます。

三週間で、完全に色は消えてしまい、茶色に戻ってしまいます。

私は、髪が長くて背中の真ん中くらいまであります。

以前、神の毛先から半分くらいブリーチしたことがあります。

つまり、半分茶色で、半分ブロンドでした。

それがすごく気に入りましたが、結構ダメージを受けたので、それからはしたことがありません。

先日、写真加工アプリを使って自分の写真を黒髪にしてみました。

それは結構かかっこいいと思いました。

やっぱり日本人には黒髪がよく似合うのかな~。

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One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

this is correct but it would sound better and more natural if you said "I've bleached the middle of my hair to my ends"

I mean, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.

I wonder if black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.

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sachisachi

Nov. 25, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

Black Hair (101)

I have black hair, so I always dye my hair light brown.

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with redo so, it gradually fades over time.

TAll the colour all disappears within three weeks and getit goes back to being light brown.

I have long hair that reaches to middle of my back.

One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair, I bleached my hair from midway right down to the ends.

What I mean is that half of my hair was brown, and half was blonde.

I liked it, but my hair gotwas damaged a lot, so since thenin the process so I haven't tried it since.

The other day, I tried changing my hair color back into black using an photo editing app.

It looked pretty cool.

I’m now wondering whether black hair goes well wsuiths Japanese people after all.

Well written!

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lisa

Nov. 21, 2024

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“The other day, I tried changing my hair color back to black using a photo editing app”.

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sachisachi

Nov. 21, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

I have black hair, soand I always dye my hair light brown.

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red itthe colour gradually fades over time.

The color all disappears within three weeks and getmy hair returns back to light brown.

I have long hair that reaches to(down) to the middle of my back.

One timce before, I've bleached from the ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

I mean half of my hair was brown, and half was blonde.

I liked it, but my hair got very damaged a lot, so since then, so I haven't tried it again since then.

The other day, I tried changediting my hair color in(to) black using an photo editing app.

It looked pretty cool.

I wonderrealized that black hair goes well wsuiths Japanese people after all.

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lummers

Nov. 16, 2024

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You can use the expression "natural colour" when talking about your hair.

"My natural hair colour is black"
"My natural colour is black"

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sachisachi

Nov. 16, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections as always!

Black Hair

I have black hair, sobut I always dye my hair light brown.

I changed "so" to "but" because I think "I always dye my hair light brown" contrasts with "I have black hair." I feel like "so" would be used more if you're talking about a result or effect of having black hair. For example, "I have black hair, so it takes a while to bleach it blonde."

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red it, the color gradually fades over time.

The color allcompletely disappears within three weeks and getturns back to light brown.

I have long hair that reaches to the middle of my back.

One time before, I've bleached fromce I bleached my hair from the ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

I mean, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.

Or "That is, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond."

I liked it, but my hair got damaged a lot, so since then I haven't tried it.

The other day, I tried changing my hair color into black in a photo using an photo editing app.

It looked pretty cool.

I wonder if black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.

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Wow, it sounds like you have a lot of experience with dying hair! I've never dyed my hair before actually.

In another post, I think you said that you work as a hairdresser. Do a lot of Japanese people ask you to dye their hair?

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sachisachi

Nov. 15, 2024

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Thank you as always! Yes, I'm a hairdresser. You have such a good memory.
A lot of my customer ask me to dye their hair, but since I live in the countryside most of my customers like simple color like black or brown because they don't want to stand out.

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I have black hair, so I always dye my hair light brown.


I have black hair, sobut I always dye my hair light brown.

I changed "so" to "but" because I think "I always dye my hair light brown" contrasts with "I have black hair." I feel like "so" would be used more if you're talking about a result or effect of having black hair. For example, "I have black hair, so it takes a while to bleach it blonde."

I have black hair, soand I always dye my hair light brown.

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Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but it gradually fades over time.


The color completely disappear in three weeks.


I have long hair that reaches to middle of my back.


I have long hair that reaches to the middle of my back.

I have long hair that reaches to(down) to the middle of my back.

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One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.


One time before, I've bleached fromce I bleached my hair from the ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

One timce before, I've bleached from the ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair, I bleached my hair from midway right down to the ends.

One time before, I've bleached from ends of my hair to the middle of my hair.

this is correct but it would sound better and more natural if you said "I've bleached the middle of my hair to my ends"

I mean half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.


I mean, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.

Or "That is, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond."

I mean half of my hair was brown, and half was blonde.

What I mean is that half of my hair was brown, and half was blonde.

I mean, half of my hair was brown, and half was blond.

I liked it, but my hair got damaged a lot, so since then I haven't tried it.


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I liked it, but my hair got very damaged a lot, so since then, so I haven't tried it again since then.

I liked it, but my hair gotwas damaged a lot, so since thenin the process so I haven't tried it since.

The other day, I tried changing my hair color into black using an photo editing app.


The other day, I tried changing my hair color into black in a photo using an photo editing app.

The other day, I tried changediting my hair color in(to) black using an photo editing app.

The other day, I tried changing my hair color back into black using an photo editing app.

It looked pretty cool.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.


I wonder if black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.

I wonderrealized that black hair goes well wsuiths Japanese people after all.

I’m now wondering whether black hair goes well wsuiths Japanese people after all.

Well written!

I wonder if black hair goes well with Japanese people after all.

The color all disappears in three weeks.


The color completely disappears in three weeks.


Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red it gradually fades over time.


Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red it, the color gradually fades over time.

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with red itthe colour gradually fades over time.

Sometimes, I dye my hair red, but when I dye with redo so, it gradually fades over time.

The color all disappears in three weeks and gets back to light brown.


The color allcompletely disappears within three weeks and getturns back to light brown.

The color all disappears within three weeks and getmy hair returns back to light brown.

TAll the colour all disappears within three weeks and getit goes back to being light brown.

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