Feb. 16, 2023
Bitcoin(7) - Price Trend
The price of bitcoin has dropped a lot in the past year. I don't know the reason but it has a similar price trend as the American stock market.
From the line graph, we can see the price of bitcoin fluctuates from Jan 26 to Feb 6; and increases by 16.26% between January 16 and February 16; as of today, it is at its peak price of 24,606 USD. In the past week, the price increased sharply.
If you bought this kind of crypto a month ago, then you would smile even in sleep now.
I don't know the reason, but it hasis displaying a similar price trend as the American stock market.
I used more specific language for conveying the information in a more formal tone because this is about monetary/fiscal markets.
From the line graph, we can see the price of bBitcoin fluctuateions from Jan 26 to Feb 6; and increasesing by 16.26% between January 16 and February 16; a. As of today, Bitcoin is at its peak price of 24,606 USD.
I split the sentence because it was a run-on sentence. Fluctuates versus fluctuations is a stylistic choice. "Fluctuates" seems to be predictable and within expectations, but "fluctuations" has the connotation of being unpredictable and constantly changing.
If you bought this kind of crypto a month ago, thennow you would be smileing even inwhile you sleep now.
The grammar here is a little odd. "You would be smirking even as you slept." would be more natural, but this comes across as smug.
Feb. 16, 2023
Thank you very much! Your explanation of "fluctuations" and "fluctuate" is so useful to me! 🤗
Bitcoin(7) - Price Trend
The price of bitcoin has dropped a lot in the past year.
I don't know the reason for it but it has a similar price trend as the American stock market.
From the line graph, we can see how the price of bitcoin fluctuates from Jan 26 to Feb 6; and increases by 16.26% between January 16 and February 16; a. As of today, it is at its peak price of 24,606 USD.
In the past week, the price increased sharply.
If you bought this kind of crypto a month ago, then you would now smile even in your sleep now.
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わー、とても面白いです。上手に書けています！
Feb. 16, 2023
いつもありがとございます！🙏
Bitcoin(7) - Price Trend
The price of bitcoin has dropped a lot in the past year.
I don't know the reason, but it has a similar seems to follow a (price) trend asimilar to that of the American stock market.
From tThe line graph, we can see the price shows the fluctuation of bitcoin fluctuatprices from Jan 26 to Feb 6;, and increases by 16.26%long with a 16.26% increase between January 16 and February 16; a 16. As of today, it is at its peak price of $24,606 USD.
In the past week, the price increased sharply.
If you bought this kind of crypto a month ago, then you would be smileing even in your sleep now.
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Great job! Keep it up 🤗
Feb. 16, 2023
Thank you so much! 🤗
From the line graph, we can see that the price of bitcoin fluctuates from Jan 26 to Feb 6;, and increases by 16.26% between January 16 and February 16; a. As of today, it is at its peak price of $24,606 USD.
In the past week, the price increased sharpdramatically.
Informal: shot up. Formal: had a dramatic increase, increased dramatically
If you bought this kind of crypto a month ago, then you would be smileing even in your sleep now.
Feb. 16, 2023
Thank you so much! :-)
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