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Scarlett_Father

Feb. 14, 2023

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Bitcoin(5) - Famous Platform Closing

A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com which is a famous and long-running bitcoin trade platform based in Finland. Which warned me that due to the extremely cold crypt-winter regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest their customers withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

I was shocked a lot when I saw the email, this website was widely considered as one of the reliable crypt trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years. I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the rest bitcoins to another platform.

I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of transfer. There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, the top one was high at 666 bitcoins which was above 15m USD. I am anxious about who the owner is and what I will be like if I can send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

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A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com which is a famous and long-running bitcoin trade platform based in Finland.

WhichThe email warned me that, due to the extremely cold crypto-winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest their customers withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

Crypt means "tomb", so I assume you meant "crypto"!

You can't start a new sentence with "which warned me...", so you either need to change the sentence a bit, or use it to introduce a subordinate clause (e.g. "I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com [...] which warned me..."

I was shocked a lot when I saw the email,; this website was widely considered asto be one of the most reliable crypto trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

You can't say "X is considered as Y", it needs to be "X is considered Y" or "X is considered to be Y"

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the rest of my bitcoins to another platform.

I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of the transfer.

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, t. The top one was high at 666 bitcoins, which was abis over 15m USD.

I am anxious about who the owner is and what I will be likewould happen if I can send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

Do you mean "lose a lot of money"? Or lose something else (trust, convenience, etc.)?

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Really good! Your writing seems to be at a fairly high level already :)

It may be helpful to refresh your knowledge of punctuation rules in English (when to use a comma, semi-colon, of full-stop) - lots of native speakers make mistakes with this too, though!

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Feb. 15, 2023

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WhichThe email warned me that, due to the extremely cold crypto-winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest their customers withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

Yes, "Crypt" is the typo of "Crypto". :-)

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Feb. 15, 2023

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Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

...lose a lot of money if the ....

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Scarlett_Father

Feb. 15, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! That's true, I often confuse a comma, semi-colon and full-stop. :-)

Bitcoin(5) - A Famous Crypto Currency Platform is Closing

A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com which is a famous and long-running bitcoin tradeing platform based in Finland.

WhichIt warned me that due to the extremely cold crypt-winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest theired to customers that they withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

へー!怖い!

I was very shocked a lot when I sawread the email, t. This website was widely considered as one of the reliable crypt trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the restof my bitcoins to another platform.

I felt a little nervous whenas I monitored the process of transfer process.

I don't blame you one bit.

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, t. The top one was high at 666 bitcoins which was above 15mM USD.

I am anxious about who the owner is and what I willould be like if I canould send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and so we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

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残念ですね。初めて聞きました。頑張って下さい!上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_Father

Feb. 14, 2023

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初めてはっとびっくりした。:-) ありがとうございます!

Bitcoin(5) - Famous Platform Closing

Bitcoin(5) - The Closing of a Famous Platform

A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com, which is a famous and long-running bitcoin tradeing platform based in Finland.

WhichThey warned me that due to the extremely coldharsh crypt-o winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut offdown the service in a year and sugges; consequently, they suggested that their customers withdraw their bitcoins as soon as possible.

A crypto winter is not necessarily "cold"; I would use harsh in this case
Shut down a service, we can shut off the water, shut off the gas, but we use shut down a service
I pluralized the bitcoin because there are multiple customers who might have more than 1 bitcoin

I was very shocked a lot when I saw the email, because this website was widely considered as one of the most reliable crypto tradeing platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the restmy bitcoins to another platform.

I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of the transfer.

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number,; the top one was high at 666 bitcoins, which was above 15m USD.

Wow!

I am anxcurious about who the owner is and what I willould be like if I canould send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

This is hypothetical so we use the conditional

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com iwas a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lotit would be a great loss to us if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

But they informed you a year in advance!

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Remember to add a conjunction or a semicolon when you are combining two simple sentences together.
Most adjective clauses need a comma before the conjunction.
Great work!

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Scarlett_Father

Feb. 14, 2023

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Thank you so much! :-)

Bitcoin(5) - Famous Platform Closing


Bitcoin(5) - Famous Platform Closing

Bitcoin(5) - The Closing of a Famous Platform

Bitcoin(5) - A Famous Crypto Currency Platform is Closing

A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com which is a famous and long-running bitcoin trade platform based in Finland.


A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com, which is a famous and long-running bitcoin tradeing platform based in Finland.

A few days ago, I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com which is a famous and long-running bitcoin tradeing platform based in Finland.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Which warned me that due to the extremely cold crypt-winter regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest their customers withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.


WhichThey warned me that due to the extremely coldharsh crypt-o winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut offdown the service in a year and sugges; consequently, they suggested that their customers withdraw their bitcoins as soon as possible.

A crypto winter is not necessarily "cold"; I would use harsh in this case Shut down a service, we can shut off the water, shut off the gas, but we use shut down a service I pluralized the bitcoin because there are multiple customers who might have more than 1 bitcoin

WhichIt warned me that due to the extremely cold crypt-winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest theired to customers that they withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

へー!怖い!

WhichThe email warned me that, due to the extremely cold crypto-winter, regardless of how hard they have been working, they are going to shut off the service in a year and suggest their customers withdraw their bitcoin as soon as possible.

Crypt means "tomb", so I assume you meant "crypto"! You can't start a new sentence with "which warned me...", so you either need to change the sentence a bit, or use it to introduce a subordinate clause (e.g. "I received an email from LocalBitcoins.com [...] which warned me..."

I was shocked a lot when I saw the email, this website was widely considered as one of the reliable crypt trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.


I was very shocked a lot when I saw the email, because this website was widely considered as one of the most reliable crypto tradeing platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

I was very shocked a lot when I sawread the email, t. This website was widely considered as one of the reliable crypt trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

I was shocked a lot when I saw the email,; this website was widely considered asto be one of the most reliable crypto trade platforms in the world and has been running for over 10 years.

You can't say "X is considered as Y", it needs to be "X is considered Y" or "X is considered to be Y"

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the rest bitcoins to another platform.


I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the restmy bitcoins to another platform.

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the restof my bitcoins to another platform.

I immediately logged into the website and transferred all the rest of my bitcoins to another platform.

I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of transfer.


I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of the transfer.

I felt a little nervous whenas I monitored the process of transfer process.

I don't blame you one bit.

I felt a little nervous when I monitored the process of the transfer.

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, the top one was high at 666 bitcoins which was above 15m USD.


There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number,; the top one was high at 666 bitcoins, which was above 15m USD.

Wow!

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, t. The top one was high at 666 bitcoins which was above 15mM USD.

There were about 7 transactions on the same transaction number, t. The top one was high at 666 bitcoins, which was abis over 15m USD.

I am anxious about who the owner is and what I will be like if I can send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.


I am anxcurious about who the owner is and what I willould be like if I canould send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

This is hypothetical so we use the conditional

I am anxious about who the owner is and what I willould be like if I canould send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

I am anxious about who the owner is and what I will be likewould happen if I can send 666 bitcoins to another digital wallet.

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.


Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com iwas a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lotit would be a great loss to us if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

But they informed you a year in advance!

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and so we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

Anyway, LocalBitcoins.com is a reliable and trusted website, and we will lose a lot if the company discontinues its service without informing us in advance.

Do you mean "lose a lot of money"? Or lose something else (trust, convenience, etc.)?

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