May 22, 2022
Yesterday, a friend called me to go out have dinner with him.
He is half of my aged and come from China.
I haven’t saw him for more than 6 months.
Even I was plans to go home have dinner with my family.
So, instead have dinner with family, I switch to a young man!
When we meted, he reminds me last year we also have dinner at the same day.
Last night was his birthday!
I am such a terrible friend!
Why has he picked me? I am a lonely old man.
Next year will I keep forget yesterday was his birthday!
Next year I wish is a girl call me and celebrate her birthday with me.
Birthday with meCelebrating my birthday together
Yesterday, a friend called me to go out have dinner with him.
He is half of my aged and comes from China.
I haven’t saween him for more than 6 months.
EvenOriginally, I was plansning to go home and have dinner with my family.
So, iInstead haveof having dinner with my family, I switch tohad dinner with a young man!
When we meted, he reminds meet, I was reminded of the same day last year when we also haved dinner at the same day.
Last night was his birthday!
I am such a terrible friend!
Why has he picked me?
I am a lonely old man.
Next year will I keepalso forget that yesterday was his birthday!
Next year I wish ishope that a girl will call me and celebrate her birthday with me.
Yesterday, a friend called me and asked me to go out and have dinner with him.
He is half of my aged and comes from China.
I haven’t saween him for more than 6 months.
Even I wasI already had plans to go home and have dinner with my family.
So, instead haveof having dinner with family, I switch to a young mandecided to have dinner with my friend!
Because of the context, it's clearer to say "with my friend" than "a young man".
When we meted, he remindsed me last yearthat we also haved dinner aton the same day. last year.
Last night was his birthday!
I am such a terrible friend!
Why has he picked me?
I am a lonely old man.
Next year I will I keepnot forget yesterday was his birthday!
Next year I wish ishope a girl calls me and asks me to celebrate her birthday with me.her.
Alternatively:
Next year I hope a girl calls me and asks to celebrate her birthday with me.
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Yesterday, a friend called me to go out and have dinner with him.
He is half of my aged and he comes from China.
I haven’t saween him for more than 6 months.
Even I was plansning to go home and have dinner with my family.
So, instead have dinner with family, I switch to a young man!
Next year, will I keep forgetting yesterday was his birthday!
Next year I, my wish is for a girl call me and celebrate her birthday with me.
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