To most people, a birthday couldan be a very special day.

They look forward to having a birthday cake and gift plus, receiving gifts, and sharing the big day with family and friends.

On this occasion, most children would celebrate their birthday by throwing a party with their beloved friends and families.

Thiseir party can take place at home or maybe in a café or restaurant.

The food can be either home-cooked food or takeaway from foodrestaurants or stores.

Traditionally, kids would have meals to gagether or, and then play some games.

They also took me out for dinner to enjoy palatabledelicious dishes.

This sounds a little unnatural still. A better way of saying this is "they also took me out for dinner to enjoy my favorite foods".

I feelt so happy to have such a good family.

Most of the time, giving a gift takes a lot ofhas a cost.

The cost is either "time" or "money" here.

Sometimes it doesn’t interest the recipient, so it ithe recipient wont even like the gift you chose, but its always easy to receive a gift.

I made guess at what you were tying to say here. It was slightly unclear. This explains that giving a gift is difficult and may result in them not even liking it, but receiving one is always easy.

Although if you make up your own minddecide that you don’t like that gift, you can sendgive it as a gift to someone else.

In my mind, I think thea humble party is fairlygood enough for me.

I prefer to spend time with my beloved peopleones.

"Loved ones" is a common English phrase that refers to the people in your life that you love (your friends and family).

I usually liked the gifts that I received because I should be thoughtfulness to anybody who gave me a gifknow that whomever gave it to me probably put a lot of thought into it.

This sounds natural.

To most people, atheir birthday could beis a very special day.

They look forward to having a birthday cake and gifts, plus sharing their big day with family and friends.

On this occasioneir birthdays, most children would celebrate their birthday by throwing a party with their beloved friends and families.

This party can take place at home or maybeey could have a part at home, in a café, or even in a restaurant.

The food can be either home-cooked food, or takeaway from fooda stores.

Traditionally, kids would have meals to gather, or play some games.

Last year I had a small party with my parents, and got showered with birthday gifts.

They also took me out for dinner to enjoy palatabletasty dishes.

You could also say delicious here! Palatable is very formal and wouldn't be used in this context.

I prefer receiving a gift, to giving one.

Most of the time, giving a gift takes a lot ofcan be quite costly.

Sometimes ithe recipient doesn’'t have any interest in the recipiengift, so it is easyier to receive a gift.

Although if you make up your own mind that you don’'t like thate gift you've been given, you canould send it as a gift to someone else.

In my mind, I think the humble party is fairlyquite enough for me.

"Fairly enough" works but sounds strange to me - quite enough is the same but more natural.

I prefer to spend time with my beloved peopleones.

Another way to say this that's more common is "loved ones"

I think I would love to receive a useful gift, like perfume, clothes, mini-indoor plants, a watch or maybe a new iPhone.

You know, the sentimental value counts even more.

Great!

I liked the gift that I received, because I should be thoughtfulness to anybody whit was thoughtful for anyone to gaive me a gift.

To/For most people, a birthday could be a very special day.

They look forward to having a birthday cake and gifts, plus sharing the big day with family and friends.

On this occasion, most children would celebrate their birthday by (throwing)/having a party with their beloved friends and families.

Most children would "have" a party that was "thrown" (organized) by their parents.

The food can be either home-cooked food or takeaway from food stoa restaurant/cateresr.

Traditionally, kids would have meals to gather or play some games.

I am not sure what "meals to gather" is trying to say.

They also took me out for dinner to enjoy palatabletasty dishes.

I prefer receiving a gift.

I prefer receiving a gift to giving one.

Most of the time, giving a gift takecosts a lot of cost.

Although, if you make up your own minddecide that you don’t like that gift, you can send it as a gift to someone else.

In my mind, I think the humble party is fairly enough for me.

In my mind, I think the humble party is sufficient for me.

I prefer to spend time with my beloved peopleones.

You know, the sentimental value counts even more.

You know, the sentimental value counts even more than the monetary value.

I liked the gift that I received because I should be thoughtfulness to anybody who gave me a gift.

I liked the gift that I received because I should be gracious to anybody who gave me a gift.

Birthday - Gift

To most people, atheir birthday could beis a very special day.

They look forward to having a birthday cake and gift plu, as well as sharing the big day with family and friends.

"Plus" is correct but the tone doesn't match the rest of the text

On this occasion, most children would celebrate their birthday by throwing a party with their beloved friends and families.

Traditionally, kids would gather to have a meals to gather or play some games.

They also took me out for dinner to enjoy palatabletasty/delicious/scrumptious dishes.

"Palatable" is used very rarely in day to day speech. Although it can be used positively, it often has negative connotations, suggesting that the food that was only acceptable to eat, e.g. - "How was your meal last nice at the restaurant?" - "It was barely palatable." - "Oh dear!"
I have suggested some alternatives for you.

I prefer having a meal to receiving a gift.s

Alternative: I would rather have a meal than receive a gift.

Most of the time, givbuying a gift takes a lot of cost.is very expensive

Sometimes it doesn’t interest the recipient, so it is easy to receive athe recipient isn't interested in the gift.

Although, if you make up your own mind that you don’t like that gifit, you can send it as a gifpresent to someone else.

"present" is another word for "gift"

In my mind, I think the humble party is fairlyjust enough for me.

I prefer to spend time with my beloved peopleones.

"Beloved people" is correct but sounds a bit old fashioned.

I think I would love to receive a useful gift like perfume, clothes, mini-indoor plants, a watch or maybe a new iPhone.

"I think" is unnecessary

You know, the sentimental value counts even moreis the most important thing.

I liked the gift that I received because I should be thoughtfulness to anybody who gave me a gift.