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Laian

Aug. 5, 2025

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Birth rate falling down.

it’s not a surprise for anyone, which birth rate falling down, the wish to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become true, not just because the high price to nurture a kid but also have the right conditions for guaranteed this child have a lively and healthy life. Having parents togethers, a structured family, money, all of them mixed, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopular in the current era. Here in my country, I simply do not know anyone who has these conditions, and of course, me included. What is expected for the future? If we follow this line, the next generations, it’s possible to have a future where we just have old people, what plans will the governments provide to handle this? so, let 's see.


Não é surpresa para ninguém que, com a queda da taxa de natalidade, o desejo de ter filhos pareça cada vez mais difícil de se concretizar, não apenas pelo alto custo de criar um filho, mas também por ter as condições certas para garantir que essa criança tenha uma vida plena e saudável. Ter pais juntos, uma família estruturada, dinheiro, tudo misturado, algo que parece normal, é muito impopular na era atual. Aqui no meu país, simplesmente não conheço ninguém que tenha essas condições, e claro, eu incluído. O que se espera para o futuro? Se seguirmos essa linha, as próximas gerações poderão ter um futuro onde teremos apenas idosos. Que planos os governos apresentarão para lidar com isso? Então, vamos ver.

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Birth rate falling downs declining.

The original is okay too. This is just a bit more professional.

iIt’s not a surprise for anyone, which that birth rate falling down, ts are declining. The wish to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become true made into reality, not just because of the high price to nurture a kid but also havecosts of nurturing a child, but also the struggle of maintaining the right conditions forto guaranteed this child have a livel a happy and healthy life.

"Kid" is okay but it's more casual. Since the rest of your sentence sounds quite professional, "child" would be a better word choice.

Having both parents togetherspresent, a structured family, money, all of them mixcombined, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopularcommon in the current era.

Here in my country, I simply do not know anyone who has these conditions, and of course, me included.

What is expected for the future?

If we follow this line,keep up this trend for the next generations, it’s possible to have a future where we justonly have old people, w. What plans will the governments provide come up with to handle this?

so, lLet 's see.

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Laian

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you!

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Birth rRate falling downs Decreasing.

it’s not a surprise forto anyone, which that the birth rate is falling down, the wishdesire to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become trueunlikely, not just because of the high price to nurture a kid but also have the rightcost of raising a kid but also the conditions for guaranteeding this child to have a lively and healthy life are lacking.

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Having parents togethers, a structured family, money, all of them mixedThe conditions of a structured family with active parents and money, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopularcommon in the current era.

Here in my country, I simply do not know anyone who has these conditions, and of course, me included.

What is expected for the future?

If we follow this line, the next generationstrend, it's possible to have a future where we just have old people,hat the next generations will be very old; what plans will the governments provide to handle this?

so, let 'sWe'll just have to see.

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Fantastic writing!

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Laian

Aug. 12, 2025

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Many thanks bro!

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What iscan we expected for the future?

If we follow this line, the next generationstrend, it’s possible to have ahat in the future wthere we just havill only be old people, what plans will the governments provide to handle this?

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Laian

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you bro!

Birth rate falling down.


Birth rRate falling downs Decreasing.

Birth rate falling downs declining.

The original is okay too. This is just a bit more professional.

it’s not a surprise for anyone, which birth rate falling down, the wish to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become true, not just because the high price to nurture a kid but also have the right conditions for guaranteed this child have a lively and healthy life.


it’s not a surprise for anyone, which that the birth rate fallis going down, t. The wish to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become truefulfill, not just because of the high price to nurture a kichild but also have the rightbecause of the conditions forrequired to guaranteed that thise child will have a lively and healthy life.

it’s not a surprise forto anyone, which that the birth rate is falling down, the wishdesire to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become trueunlikely, not just because of the high price to nurture a kid but also have the rightcost of raising a kid but also the conditions for guaranteeding this child to have a lively and healthy life are lacking.

Corrections made for a more natural sounding text!

iIt’s not a surprise for anyone, which that birth rate falling down, ts are declining. The wish to have a children, seems more and more difficulty to become true made into reality, not just because of the high price to nurture a kid but also havecosts of nurturing a child, but also the struggle of maintaining the right conditions forto guaranteed this child have a livel a happy and healthy life.

"Kid" is okay but it's more casual. Since the rest of your sentence sounds quite professional, "child" would be a better word choice.

Having parents togethers, a structured family, money, all of them mixed, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopular in the current era.


HavBeing parents togethers, a structured family, money, all of them mixed, something whichin a two parent household, having a structured family, money. Having a mix of these seems normal, but it's not very unpopularcommon in the current era.

Having parents togethers, a structured family, money, all of them mixedThe conditions of a structured family with active parents and money, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopularcommon in the current era.

Having both parents togetherspresent, a structured family, money, all of them mixcombined, something which seems normal, it’s very unpopularcommon in the current era.

Here in my country, I simply do not know anyone who has these conditions, and of course, me included.


Here in my country, I simply do not know anyone who has all these conditions, and of course, meyself included.

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What is expected for the future?


What iscan we expected for the future?

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If we follow this line, the next generations, it’s possible to have a future where we just have old people, what plans will the governments provide to handle this?


If we follow this line, the next generationstrend, it’s possible to have ahat in the future wthere we just havill only be old people, what plans will the governments provide to handle this?

If we follow this line, the next generationstrend, it's possible to have a future where we just have old people,hat the next generations will be very old; what plans will the governments provide to handle this?

If we follow this line,keep up this trend for the next generations, it’s possible to have a future where we justonly have old people, w. What plans will the governments provide come up with to handle this?

so, let 's see.


so, let 'sWe'll just have to see.

so, lLet 's see.

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