Jan. 26, 2021
Bipolarization
These days, everyone is talking about bipolarization. An education critic says this is also the case with the academic ability of elementary, junior high school, and senior high school students. However, he also says that it does not mean that some students are extremely smart. He says some students are becoming less and less smart. I believe the governments of each country should deal with this.
Bipolarization
These days, everyone is talking about bipolarization.
An education critic says this is also the case with the academic ability of elementary, junior high school, and senior high school students.
However, he also says that ithis does not mean that some students are extremely smart.
He says some students are becoming less andactually becoming less smart.
"Actually" adds emphasis and only one less smart is needed. You could italicize "less" for more emphasis.
I believe the governments of each country should deal with this.
I believe that each country's government should deal with this issue.
Jan. 26, 2021
Your english is great. My changes are mostly stylistic (^^)
Jan. 29, 2021
Thank you!!
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Bipolarization This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, everyone is talking about bipolarization. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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An education critic says this is also the case with the academic ability of elementary, junior high school, and senior high school students. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, he also says that it does not mean that some students are extremely smart. However, he also says that |
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He says some students are becoming less and less smart. He says some students are "Actually" adds emphasis and only one less smart is needed. You could italicize "less" for more emphasis. |
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I believe the governments of each country should deal with this. I believe the governments of each country should deal with this. I believe that each country's government should deal with this issue. |
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