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When you write a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comtemporaries were like. At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about who he was like and a deep insights in to the life. This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men who decides how politics should be.


政治家の伝記がその人物の仕事とその人物が生きた時代の人間を描くのは当然だが、同時にそれは人間を書くいきいきとした筆致や人生に対する深い洞察を伴うものでなければならない。なぜなら政治がいかに近代化しても、それを動かし、その究極の意味を決定するのは、生身の人間であるからだ。

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When you write a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comntemporaries were like.

At the same time, you should give ainclude vivid descriptions aboutof whoat he was like and a deep insights in to thehis life.

This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men who who decides how politics should be.

Biography

When you write a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comtemporaries were like.

At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about who he was likehis personality and a deep insights in to the life.

This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men whono matter how modernize political issues get, it is people that decides how politics should be.

Biography

When you are writeing a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comtemporaries were like.

At the same time, you should also give a vivid descriptions about whoat he was like and a deep insights in to their life.

This is because however theno matter how political issues get modernized, it is menup to us who decides how politics should be.

"up to us" makes it more personal to the reader

Biography

When you write a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comtemporaries were like.

At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about whoat he was like and a deep insights in to their life.

"who he was like" can be replaced with:
"who he was" or "what he was like"

This is because howeverno matter how the political issues get modernized, it is menup to the people alive today who decides how politics should be.

To match what you have written in Japanese: "生身の人間"

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When you write a biography of a politician, it is necessary to write about what he did and what his comntemporaries were like.

At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about who he was like and a deep insights in to the life.


At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about whoat he was like and a deep insights in to their life.

"who he was like" can be replaced with: "who he was" or "what he was like"

At the same time, you should also give a vivid descriptions about whoat he was like and a deep insights in to their life.

At the same time, you should give a vivid descriptions about who he was likehis personality and a deep insights in to the life.

At the same time, you should give ainclude vivid descriptions aboutof whoat he was like and a deep insights in to thehis life.

This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men who decides how politics should be.


This is because howeverno matter how the political issues get modernized, it is menup to the people alive today who decides how politics should be.

To match what you have written in Japanese: "生身の人間"

This is because however theno matter how political issues get modernized, it is menup to us who decides how politics should be.

"up to us" makes it more personal to the reader

This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men whono matter how modernize political issues get, it is people that decides how politics should be.

This is because however the political issues get modernized, it is men who who decides how politics should be.

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