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Roads hasve been built almost everywhere, even thein remote rural areas, so people can drive cars back and forth between their homes and workplaces.

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Also, out of the concern tofor air pollution that is mainly caused by the exhaust gas, riding a bike is a great choice for people.

In this context, the appearance of bike sharing immediately draws people’s attention.

It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the others say it also has many disadvantages.

Riding a bike does not harm to the air and the environment.

Second, it ipromotes a healthy lifestyle.

No matter whether it's in busy cities or countrysides, people can ride bikes to work and schools and back to homes, by which can help them keepkeep them healthy.

Third, its low prices and locations near to crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, make it popular with the general public.

Last but not least, it is a wise way to gradually improvncrease people’s awareness of protecting the environment.

Day by day, not only they would acquirethey develop a habit, but also they would influence people around them.

With the new choice, I believe more and more people wouldill like the idea ias both good for nature and for humans.

AsOn the other side of the some coinhand, bike sharing also has some headaches.

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Among allthem, the most outstanding problem is the random parking of bikes.

According to news reports, many bikes are parked by the sides of evermany streets and roads randomly, which causes a lot of accidents and makes the cities seemappear to be in a mess.

BesidesIn addition, some bikes werehave been stolen.

Without strict rules and regulations for using the bikes, many residents take these bikes as their own properties,y and some onpeople even steal them to salein order to sell them.

Thoese negative events urge related menhave prompted people, companies and governments to take action to maintain the public order and to set up new laws and rules to ensure the proper functions of bike sharing plans.

As long as thoese problems are addressed, the bike sharing must bwill become more efficient and convenient.

To sum up, the bike sharing is still onat the start stage which needs to be improved and strengthenedbeginning stages so there's room for improvement.

Although there are some disadvantages tof it, its advantages are more attractive and its great potentials needs to be explored in the future.

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Roads hasve been built almost everywhere, even the in (remote) rural areas, so people can drive cars back and forth between their homes and workplaces.

However, with the increasing number of automobiles, accidents and traffic jawsms are increaseding, which impacts people’s lifeves.

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However, with the increasinged number of automobiles, accidents and traffic jawms increased whichhave impactsed people’s life.

Also, oOut of the concern tofor air pollution thatwhich is mainly caused by the exhaust gases, riding bikes is a great choice for people.

In this context, tThe appearance of bike sharing immediately draw people’s attention.

It is highly praised by some people because of its advantages, but the others say it also has many disadvantages.

Riding bikes does not harm to the air andor the environment.

Secondly, it ipromotes a healthy lifestyle.

No mattWhether in busy cities or the countrysides, people can ride bikes to work and, schools and back to homes, by which can help them keep, or their houses while also helping to keep them healthy.

Third, itsly, the low prices and locationriding spots near to crowded places, such as communities, bus stations, central business districts, schools and universities, makes it popular with the general public.

Last but not leastly, it is a wise way to gradually improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment.

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With the new choice, I believe more and more people would like the idea of bike sharing, as it is both good for nature and humans.

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As the other side of the some coin,However bike sharing also has some headachdisadvantages.

Among all, tThe most outstanding problem is the random parking of bikes.

According to news reports, many bikes are randomly parked by the sides of every streets and roads randomly, which causes a lot of accidents, and makes the cities seem to be into a mess.

Besides,Also some bikes wereget stolen.

Without strict rules and regulations for using the bikes, many residents take these bikes as their own properties, some onand some even steal them to saleell.

Thoese negative events urge related men, companies and governments to take action to maintain the public order and set up new laws and rules to ensure the proper functions of bike sharing plans.

As long as thoese problems are addressed, the bike sharing must be more efficient and convenient.

To sum up, the bike sharing is still oin the start stage whichbeginning stages and needs to be improved and strengthened.

Although there are some disadvantages of it, its, the advantages are more attractive and itbike sharing has great potentials that needs to be explored in the future.