Oct. 10, 2020
Bike
I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it. This is a Phoenix brand bike which was bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY. Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpful because I often ride it in spring and autumn. I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someone, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened. I once thought that maybe someone would ride it in a hurry and they would return it later, but I am waiting for that until this afternoon, no expected thing happens. Although I am very helpless, there is still no way. Forget it, buy another one online instead.
Bike
I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it.
This is a Phoenix brand bike which wasI bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY.
Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpuseful because I often ride it in spring and autumn.
I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someonesomeone would steal it, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, ss. Stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened.
It sounds more natural to split this into 2 sentences and use the active voice in the first sentence.
I once thought that maybe someone would ridetook it in a hurry and that they would return it later, but I am waiting for thated until this afternoon, no expected thing happens. and no one brought it back.
Although I am very helpless, there is still no way.There's nothing I can do about it now.
FI should forget it, and buy another one online instead.
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Sorry to hear about your bike! I hope someone returns it eventually!
Oct. 10, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and good wishes. By the way, please write Chinese journals as much as possible so that I can help you out.
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I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a Phoenix brand bike which was bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY. This is a Phoenix brand bike which |
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Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpful because I often ride it in spring and autumn. Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very |
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I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someone, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened. I didn't expect that It sounds more natural to split this into 2 sentences and use the active voice in the first sentence. |
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I once thought that maybe someone would ride it in a hurry and they would return it later, but I am waiting for that until this afternoon, no expected thing happens. I |
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Although I am very helpless, there is still no way.
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Forget it, buy another one online instead.
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