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Fire at school

There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears. This sound went after her everywhere. It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of them. She knew when and why it appeared.
When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a fire alarm. But it didn't make her anxious. Instead of that, she left a dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.
It ringed so loud, that Elena thought, she would never able to hear anymore. She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.
Elena thought, that she was alone in the building. However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes. Kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm. Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a fire.
As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived. There was a fire in one of the classes . Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire. Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.

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Nov. 10, 2022

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She knew when and why it appeared.

But it didn't make her anxious.

However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes.

As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived.

There was a fire in one of the classes .

Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.

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ksushalev

Nov. 10, 2022

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Fire at school


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There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.


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There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears. There was a constant noise in Elena's ears.

This sound went after her everywhere.


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This sound went afterfollowed her everywhere. This sound followed her everywhere.

It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of them.


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It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of ithem. It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of it.

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She knew when and why it appeared.


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When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a fire alarm.


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But it didn't make her anxious.


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Instead of that, she left a dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.


Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor. Instead, she left the dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor. Instead of that, she left the dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

It ringed so loud, that Elena thought, she would never able to hear anymore.


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It rianged so loud, that Elena thought, that she would never able to hear anymore. It rang so loud that Elena thought that she would never able to hear anymore.

She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.


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Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.


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Elena thought, that she was alone in the building. Elena thought that she was alone in the building.

However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes.


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Kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.


KThese kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm. These kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.

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Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a fire.


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As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived.


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There was a fire in one of the classes .


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Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire.


Something washad burst in the laboratory and caused athe fire. Something had burst in the laboratory and caused the fire.

Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire. Something burst in the laboratory and caused a fire.

Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.


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