Nov. 3, 2025
Day 4
I live in a small town. The temperature there suddenly dropped overnight. When I took a walk outside this afternoon, I found the ground already covered with fallen leaves. They sounded crunchy when I stepped on.
I gradually developed a habit of taking a stroll three or four times a week. I once read an article that said walking could put people into a staut called Divergent Thinking. That feels true to me, since while on the stroll, I can't help thinking about all kind of things, and don't feel mental fatigue afterward. There are many other benefits that walking outside can bring you, I'll continue tormrrow.
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Day 4
I live in a small town.
The temperature there suddenly dropped overnight.
The temperature here suddenly dropped overnight.
Since you are in the place you are speaking about, you would say "here"
When I took a walk outside this afternoon, I found the ground already covered with fallen leaves.
They sounded crunchy when I stepped on them. They sounded crunchy when I stepped on them.
You need to reference what was stepped on
I gradually developed a habit of taking a stroll three or four times a week.
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a staute called D"divergent Tthinking."
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a state called "divergent thinking."
No need to capitalize this (e.g., it is a concept but not a title being referenced)
That feels true to me, since while on themy stroll, I can't help thinking about all kind of things, and don't feel mentally fatigued afterward.
That feels true to me, since while on my stroll, I can't help thinking about all kind of things, and don't feel mentally fatigued afterward.
Using feelings as adjectives about ourselves is more natural phrasing, the same way I would say "I'm sad" instead of "I am feeling sadness"
There are many other benefits that walking outside can bring you,. I'll continue tormorrow.
There are many other benefits that walking outside can bring you. I'll continue tomorrow.
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Nov. 4, 2025
Thank you!
I live in a small town.
The temperature there suddenly dropped overnight.
When I took a walk outside this afternoon, I found the ground already covered with fallen leaves.
They sounded crunchymade a crunching sound when I stepped on them.
They made a crunching sound when I stepped on them.
I gradually developed a habit of taking a stroll three or four times a week.
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a staute called "Divergent Thinking".
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a state called "Divergent Thinking".
That feels true to me, since while on thetaking a stroll, I caouldn't help myself thinking about all kinds of things, and don't feelwithout feeling any mental fatigue afterward.
That feels true to me, since while taking a stroll, I couldn't help myself thinking about all kinds of things, without feeling any mental fatigue afterward.
There are many other benefits thato walking outside can bring you,. I'll continue tormrrowhe topic in tomorrow's post.
There are many other benefits to walking outside. I'll continue the topic in tomorrow's post.
Nov. 4, 2025
Thank you!
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I live in a small town. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The temperature there suddenly dropped overnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The temperature Since you are in the place you are speaking about, you would say "here" |
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When I took a walk outside this afternoon, I found the ground already covered with fallen leaves. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They sounded crunchy when I stepped on.
They They sounded crunchy when I stepped on them. They sounded crunchy when I stepped on them. You need to reference what was stepped on |
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I gradually developed a habit of taking a stroll three or four times a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I once read an article that said walking could put people into a staut called Divergent Thinking.
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a sta
I once read an article that said walking could put people into a sta No need to capitalize this (e.g., it is a concept but not a title being referenced) |
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That feels true to me, since while on the stroll, I can't help thinking about all kind of things, and don't feel mental fatigue afterward.
That feels true to me, since while
That feels true to me, since while on Using feelings as adjectives about ourselves is more natural phrasing, the same way I would say "I'm sad" instead of "I am feeling sadness" |
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There are many other benefits that walking outside can bring you, I'll continue tormrrow.
There are many other benefits t
There are many other benefits that walking outside can bring you |
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