Feb. 24, 2020
Have you heard about the new product everybody in the US seem to be obsessed with? Some people even claim it has already made a revolution and made lots of people skip meat. If you haven’t been deaf lately, you have probably guessed it right. Yep, it’s the Beyond meat branded artificial meat. Not only is it made out of plant protein, it’s also been specifically designed to taste like a real meat. Scientists have worked hard to imitate real meat’s texture, smell, outlook, color and even the change of color meat has while roasting. There was an interview showing the lab where all the characteristics have been measured, designed and tested. There were several departments of the lab: Texture, Smell, Color and Taste test.
Texture department. At the texture department they showed off their E-mouth machine which’s aim is to squeeze the ,,meat,, and to analyze the pressure applied. So that they know how close they are to the texture of a a true meat by comparing the chewing resistance. The’ve even added little white balls to simulate greasy look of the hamburger meat
At the Smell department their job is to extract separate elements which make real meat smell like one and try imitate it with different additions
The Color’s department role is to not only make it look like a real meat when on the shop window, but also change its color as one would expect when frying meat on a frying pan. It has to change its color and look like a real fried meat after cooking.
The taste test had to prove to convince the audience that this artificial meat is really worth buying and trying. Well then, we can now get to try it by ourselves since the meat is in front of us, on the table, as one of the components of the burger! Let’s put it into test with no further ado!
Beyond Meat
Have you heard about the new product everybody in the US seems to be obsessed with?
Some people even claim it has already made a revolution and made lots of people skip meat.
If you haven’t been deaf lately, you ha've probably already guessed it right.
A phrase you would hear more often than 'If you haven’t been deaf lately' is 'Unless you've been living under a rock..'.
Yep, it’s the Beyond meat branded artificial meat.
Not only is it made out of plant protein, it’s also been specifically designed to taste like a real meat.
Scientists have worked hard to imitate real meat’s texture, smell, outlook, color and even the change of color meat has while roasting.
There was an interview showing the lab where all the characteristics have been measured, designed and tested.
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They’ve even added little, white balls to simulate greasy look of the hamburger meat
At the Smell department their job is to extract separate elements which make real meat smell like one and try imitate it with different additions
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It has to change its color and look like a real fried meat after cooking.
The taste test had to prove to and convince the audience that this artificial meat is really worth buying and trying.
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Well then, we can now get to try it byout ourselves since the meat is in front of us, on the table, as one of the components of the burger!
or 'we can now try it ourselves since...'
Let’s put it into test with no further ado!
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