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Jack

Sept. 30, 2020

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I really want to help people who are learning Chinese, but it seems that there are few people who are learning Chinese here. If you are learning Chinese right now, please write essays as many as possible, so I can help you with them. Meanwhile, if it's possible, please learn Chinese, I would be happy to help. Thank you guys very much. See you.


我非常想帮助学习汉语的同学,但好像这个网站上学习汉语的人太少了。所以,如果你正在学习汉语,请多写一些短文,我会积极帮你们修改。同时,如果有可能的话,欢迎同学们都来学汉语,我会热情提供帮助。谢谢大家。

Corrections

I really want to help people who are learning Chinese, but it seems that there arelike very few people who are learning Chineseit here.

where is here? you should establish the location first, then from that point forward, you can use "here".

If you are learning Chinese right now, please write essays as many essays as possible, so I can help you with them.

you don't have to use "right now", as that is implied.

Meanwhile, if it's possible, please learn Chinese, I would be happy to help.

This sentence is not necessary. you are basically repeating the same thing as the last sentence.

Thank you guysall very much.

Avoid using "guys". That implies everyone is a man. Instead, use gender neutral words.

See you.

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Jack

Sept. 30, 2020

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Thank you for your correction and notification. I got it.

I really want to help people who are learning Chinese, but it seems that there are few people who are learning Chinese here.


I really want to help people who are learning Chinese, but it seems that there arelike very few people who are learning Chineseit here.

where is here? you should establish the location first, then from that point forward, you can use "here".

If you are learning Chinese right now, please write essays as many as possible, so I can help you with them.


If you are learning Chinese right now, please write essays as many essays as possible, so I can help you with them.

you don't have to use "right now", as that is implied.

Meanwhile, if it's possible, please learn Chinese, I would be happy to help.


Meanwhile, if it's possible, please learn Chinese, I would be happy to help.

This sentence is not necessary. you are basically repeating the same thing as the last sentence.

Thank you guys very much.


Thank you guysall very much.

Avoid using "guys". That implies everyone is a man. Instead, use gender neutral words.

See you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Best wishes


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