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Inesssssss

Feb. 13, 2023

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Best Friends Forever

This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and me. It's been a long time that our three girls gahter together. The last time we met was 3 years ago before the covid-19 on the Maggie's wedding party. And yesterday we hang out for the similar reason that Martha is going to be get married soon. Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school except the topic from boys to men. Martha made the announcement, we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, they asked me when it's my turn. Time fly fast but our friendship is not fade out. I appreciate it a lot. They are like families without blood lineage. Looking back the journey, we met a bounch of people, most of them will only with you for a ride. But few of them you can tell in the deep down of the heart that they will with you for this long life. Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conforts when you know there someone out there will be your support.

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Best Friends Forever

This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and meMaggie, Martha and I will be friends for 19 years this year.

or,

The friendship among Maggie, Martha, and I will reach 19 years this year.

Congratulations!

It's been a long time that oursince we three girls gahterhave gathered together.

or,

It's been a long time since we three women have gathered together.

The last time we met was 3 years ago before the covid-19 on theat Maggie's wedding party before covid-19.

And yYesterday we haung out for thea similar reason thatbecause Martha is going to be get married soon.

Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school except the topic has changed from boys to men.

Martha made the announcement, and then we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, t. They asked me when it's my turn.

Time flyies fast but our friendship idoes not fade out.

I appreciate ithat a lot.

They are like families without blood lineage.

Looking back at the journey, we met a bounch of people, but most of them will only with you for a ridere with us only for a short time.

I'm not sure what you mean by "ride" here so this is my best guess at a correction.

ButIn only a few of them you can tell in thecan you tell deep down ofin their hearts that they will be with you for this longyour whole life.

Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conmforts when youme to know there is someone out there who will be youthere for support.

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oh, this is so sweet! Well done!

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Inesssssss

Feb. 14, 2023

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Thanks~Mari

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Inesssssss

Feb. 25, 2023

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Looking back at the journey, we met a bounch of people, but most of them will only with you for a ridere with us only for a short time.

I was going to express: like riding a bike, some people will only along the side for a short journey.

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mari

Feb. 25, 2023

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oh, okay. Then my correction is, "Looking back, we met a bunch of people but most of them went along for the ride with us only for a short time."

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Inesssssss

Feb. 26, 2023

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oh, okay. Then my correction is, "Looking back, we met a bunch of people but most of them went along for the ride with us only for a short time."

thanks~~got it!!

This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and me.

不好意思,我不太知道marching应该表达。你可以写中文句子,我就会翻译 :)

It's been a long time that oursince the three of us girls gahterthered together.

The last time we met was 3 years ago, before the covid-19 on thepandemic, on Maggie's wedding party.

人的名字以前不用the

And yesterday we haung out for the similar reason that Martha is going to be get married soon.

Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school, except the topic of our conversations has changed from boys to men.

Martha made the announcement, we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, and they asked me when it's my turn will be my turn to get married.

Time fly fasties quickly but our friendship idoes not fade out.

They are like families without blood lineagesisters to me, even though we are not related by blood.

Looking back on the journey of life, we meet a bounch of people, most of thewhom will only with you for a short part of the ride.

But a few of them, you can tell in the deep down of the heart that they willin your heart l, will stay with you for this longyour entire life.

Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conmforts you when you know there someone out there who will be your support.

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写得挺好,只需要注意语法~

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Inesssssss

Feb. 14, 2023

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This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and me.

哈哈,我本来想说的是“我们的友谊要走进第19个年头了”,然后好像一直都想不到怎么合适的表达。

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Inesssssss

Feb. 14, 2023

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谢谢~
我也发现我的语法有点太弱了,最近都一直在补语法的漏洞。可是学的时候感觉非常明白,一到自己写句子就又都忘了,有啥好的建议嘛?

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zhainv

Feb. 14, 2023

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哈哈,我本来想说的是“我们的友谊要走进第19个年头了”,然后好像一直都想不到怎么合适的表达。

啊,明白了。可以说This year, we will have been friends for 19 years或者This is our nineteenth year of friendship。

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zhainv

Feb. 14, 2023

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谢谢~ 我也发现我的语法有点太弱了,最近都一直在补语法的漏洞。可是学的时候感觉非常明白,一到自己写句子就又都忘了,有啥好的建议嘛?

Hmm,我觉得学习语法练习(比方说fill the gaps练习)可能有用。可是写/说英文是最好的办法,进步你的语感,让语法感觉很自然。

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Inesssssss

Feb. 14, 2023

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Hmm,我觉得学习语法练习(比方说fill the gaps练习)可能有用。可是写/说英文是最好的办法,进步你的语感,让语法感觉很自然。

嗯嗯嗯~感觉还是要多用,不断写不断改正会好一点~谢谢呀

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Inesssssss

Feb. 14, 2023

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啊,明白了。可以说This year, we will have been friends for 19 years或者This is our nineteenth year of friendship。

got it!

Best Friend Forever


This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and me.


This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and me.

不好意思,我不太知道marching应该表达。你可以写中文句子,我就会翻译 :)

This year is our friendship marching in 19 years, Maggie, Martha and meMaggie, Martha and I will be friends for 19 years this year.

or, The friendship among Maggie, Martha, and I will reach 19 years this year. Congratulations!

It's been a long time that our three girls gahter together.


It's been a long time that oursince the three of us girls gahterthered together.

It's been a long time that oursince we three girls gahterhave gathered together.

or, It's been a long time since we three women have gathered together.

The last time we met was 3 years ago before the covid-19 on the Maggie's wedding party.


The last time we met was 3 years ago, before the covid-19 on thepandemic, on Maggie's wedding party.

人的名字以前不用the

The last time we met was 3 years ago before the covid-19 on theat Maggie's wedding party before covid-19.

And yesterday we hang out for the similar reason that Martha is going to be get married soon.


And yesterday we haung out for the similar reason that Martha is going to be get married soon.

And yYesterday we haung out for thea similar reason thatbecause Martha is going to be get married soon.

Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school except the topic from boys to men.


Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school, except the topic of our conversations has changed from boys to men.

Everything is just like the old times when we were in the school except the topic has changed from boys to men.

Martha made the announcement, we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, they asked me when it's my turn.


Martha made the announcement, we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, and they asked me when it's my turn will be my turn to get married.

Martha made the announcement, and then we played with Maggie's baby and talked about the old days, t. They asked me when it's my turn.

Time fly fast but our friendship is not fade out.


Time fly fasties quickly but our friendship idoes not fade out.

Time flyies fast but our friendship idoes not fade out.

I appreciate it a lot.


I appreciate ithat a lot.

They are like families without blood lineage.


They are like families without blood lineagesisters to me, even though we are not related by blood.

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Looking back the journey, we met a bounch of people, most of them will only with you for a ride.


Looking back on the journey of life, we meet a bounch of people, most of thewhom will only with you for a short part of the ride.

Looking back at the journey, we met a bounch of people, but most of them will only with you for a ridere with us only for a short time.

I'm not sure what you mean by "ride" here so this is my best guess at a correction.

But few of them you can tell in the deep down of the heart that they will with you for this long life.


But a few of them, you can tell in the deep down of the heart that they willin your heart l, will stay with you for this longyour entire life.

ButIn only a few of them you can tell in thecan you tell deep down ofin their hearts that they will be with you for this longyour whole life.

Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conforts when you know there someone out there will be your support.


Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conmforts you when you know there someone out there who will be your support.

Although I hold the idea that loneliness is the fate of human beings, it still conmforts when youme to know there is someone out there who will be youthere for support.

Best Friends Forever


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