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zaozao

May 15, 2022

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Benefits of language learning

I reckon that learning and mastering a foreign language is important. Also, this skill enables us to travel around the world and do not need to worry different language stuffs.

In the hope of traveling around the world, I decide to study another language which is used by most people. (My biggest motivation of studying another language is that I hope to travel around the world. Is this sentence right?)

I would say that studying another language benifits us a lot. Firstly, it makes us have a better understanding of the target language countries and increase the knowledge of their culture and manner. Secondly, through some Apps, I can make friends with foreigners as well. Chatting with like-minded people can put me in a good mood! We can share things happened around us as well as beautiful pictures with each other via mails or Instagram.

Overall, I would suggest that we learn several languages when we are young. Of course, it will never be too lte to study an language.

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Also, this skill enables us to travel around the world and do not need to worry different language stuffstakes the worry out of communicating.

In the hope of traveling around the world, I decide to study another language which is used by most people.

I decided to study another language that is spoken by many in the hopes of travelling around the world.

(My biggest motivation ofor studying another language is that I hope toe prospect of traveling around the world. Is this sentence right? )

I would say that studying another language beniefits us a lot.

Firstly, it makgives us have a better understanding of the countries where the target language countriesis spoken and increase thes knowledge of their culture and manner.

Of course, it will's never be too late to study an language.

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Nice work! You've worked hard on your English and it shows :)

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zaozao

May 16, 2022

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Thank you so much for correcting!!!

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bardarb

May 17, 2022

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No worries at all zaozao :)

Benefits of language learning


I reckon that learning and mastering a foreign language is important.


Also, this skill enables us to travel around the world and do not need to worry different language stuffs.


Also, this skill enables us to travel around the world and do not need to worry different language stuffstakes the worry out of communicating.

In the hope of traveling around the world, I decide to study another language which is used by most people.


In the hope of traveling around the world, I decide to study another language which is used by most people.

I decided to study another language that is spoken by many in the hopes of travelling around the world.

(My biggest motivation of studying another language is that I hope to travel around the world. Is this sentence right? )


(My biggest motivation ofor studying another language is that I hope toe prospect of traveling around the world. Is this sentence right? )

I would say that studying another language benifits us a lot.


I would say that studying another language beniefits us a lot.

Firstly, it makes us have a better understanding of the target language countries and increase the knowledge of their culture and manner.


Firstly, it makgives us have a better understanding of the countries where the target language countriesis spoken and increase thes knowledge of their culture and manner.

Secondly, through some Apps, I can make friends with foreigners as well.


Chatting with like-minded people can put me in a good mood!


We can share things happened around us as well as beautiful pictures with each other via mails or Instagram.


Overall, I would suggest that we learn several languages when we are young.


Of course, it will never be too lte to study an language.


Of course, it will's never be too late to study an language.

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