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Beings Losing skills of Speaking Due to Electronics?

These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, therefore, being considered low-ability persons in communication face to face by some people. I partly agree with this view.

Whether our speaking skills decline depends on concrete individuals. With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals rely on them, and they may cause some stagnant actions while talking with others. Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluent they contact with others. Nevertheless, we can still notice certain social butterflies, communicating with other people sophisticatedly no matter what platforms they choose.

Appropriate practice can compensate for the drawbacks of communication because of utilizing electronic devices for long time. There must be some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Apps, and remind people around them of employ voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from being rusty in face-to-face talking. Besides, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others gradually. Moreover, it is sometimes difficult for us to judge a person's ability to speak when he or she is drafting. So all the methods above will affect the result of the speaking ability of one individual.

In conclusion, we should stop stating such an one-size-fits-all perspective that human beings are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronics.

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BeingsAre We Losing skills of Speaking Due to ElectronicsSpeaking Skills Due to Technology ?

These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, and therefore, being considered low-ability persons in some people find it difficult to communicatione face to face by some people.

Whether outheir speaking skills decline depends on concrete individualsthe person.

Removed "our" since this sentence is about a hypothetical person.

With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals rely on them, and theytechnology, a many rely on it so it may cause some stagnant actiondifficulties while talspeaking with others.

Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluenteasily they contanect with others.

Appropriate practice can compensate for the negative drawbacks ofn communication because of utilizing electronic devices for long timefrom using technology for too long.

There must bare some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Adangers of the overindulgence in apps, and remind peopleothers around them of employto use voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from begetting rusty in face-to-face talkinginteractions.

Besides that, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others graduanotice slowly worsening people skillys.

Moreover, it is sometimes difficult for us to judge a person's ability to speak when he or she is drafting.

Not sure what you mean by drafting here. This part needs more detail.

So all the methodsTherefore, all the above will affect the result of the speaking ability of oneany individual.

In conclusion, we should stopavoid stating such ana one-size-fits-all perspective that human beingspeople are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronicstechnology.

normally, putting an “an” in front of a word that starts with a vowel is correct. But here, probably because it comes from a saying, it's actually correct to use “a” instead.

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Nice work. If I had advice to give, it would be to be more concise. The shorter, direct version of whatever you want to say will likely be correct, and it'll be easier for you to notice mistakes.

Beings Losing skills ofAre People Losing the Ability to Speaking Due to Electronics?

These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, therefore, being considered low-ability persons inby people who prefer to communicatione face to face by some people.

I partly agree with this view.

Whether our speaking skills decline depends on concreteertain individuals.

I'm not too sure what you meant to say with "concrete"

With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals have come to rely on them, and they may cause some stagnant actions while talking with others.

"have come to" expresses the idea that people are becoming reliant on tech.

Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluent they contactat connecting with others.

Nevertheless, we can still notice certain social butterflies, communicating with other people sophisticatedly no matter what platforms they choose.

Appropriate practice can compensate for the drawbacks of communication because of utilizing electronic devices for long time.

There must be some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Apps, and remind people around them of employ voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from being rusty in face-to-face talkingcommunication.

BesidesHowever, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others gradually.

Moreover, it is sometimes difficult for us to judge a person's ability to speak when he or she is drafting.

So all the methods above will affect the result of the speaking ability of onean individual.

In conclusion, we should stop stating such an one-size-fits-all perspectivelumping everyone together by saying that human beings are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronics.

The phrase "one-size-fits-all" is mostly used for products or methods such as diets and exercise routines.

Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluent they contact with others.


Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluent they contactat connecting with others.

Even some writers admit that the more proficient their writing skills are, the less fluenteasily they contanect with others.

Nevertheless, we can still notice certain social butterflies, communicating with other people sophisticatedly no matter what platforms they choose.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Appropriate practice can compensate for the drawbacks of communication because of utilizing electronic devices for long time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Appropriate practice can compensate for the negative drawbacks ofn communication because of utilizing electronic devices for long timefrom using technology for too long.

There must be some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Apps, and remind people around them of employ voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from being rusty in face-to-face talking.


There must be some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Apps, and remind people around them of employ voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from being rusty in face-to-face talkingcommunication.

There must bare some people who realize the hazard of indulging ourselves in a variety of Adangers of the overindulgence in apps, and remind peopleothers around them of employto use voice messages instead of typing to prevent them from begetting rusty in face-to-face talkinginteractions.

Besides, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others gradually.


BesidesHowever, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others gradually.

Besides that, some opt to train AI to improve their speaking skills if they are aware of themselves having not been adept at mingling with others graduanotice slowly worsening people skillys.

Moreover, it is sometimes difficult for us to judge a person's ability to speak when he or she is drafting.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, it is sometimes difficult for us to judge a person's ability to speak when he or she is drafting.

Not sure what you mean by drafting here. This part needs more detail.

In conclusion, we should stop stating such an one-size-fits-all perspective that human beings are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronics.


In conclusion, we should stop stating such an one-size-fits-all perspectivelumping everyone together by saying that human beings are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronics.

The phrase "one-size-fits-all" is mostly used for products or methods such as diets and exercise routines.

In conclusion, we should stopavoid stating such ana one-size-fits-all perspective that human beingspeople are losing the ability to talk with each other due to electronicstechnology.

normally, putting an “an” in front of a word that starts with a vowel is correct. But here, probably because it comes from a saying, it's actually correct to use “a” instead.

Beings Losing skills of Speaking Due to Electronics?


Beings Losing skills ofAre People Losing the Ability to Speaking Due to Electronics?

BeingsAre We Losing skills of Speaking Due to ElectronicsSpeaking Skills Due to Technology ?

These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, therefore, being considered low-ability persons in communication face to face by some people.


These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, therefore, being considered low-ability persons inby people who prefer to communicatione face to face by some people.

These days, people tend to connect with each other through phones and computers, and therefore, being considered low-ability persons in some people find it difficult to communicatione face to face by some people.

I partly agree with this view.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whether our speaking skills decline depends on concrete individuals.


Whether our speaking skills decline depends on concreteertain individuals.

I'm not too sure what you meant to say with "concrete"

Whether outheir speaking skills decline depends on concrete individualsthe person.

Removed "our" since this sentence is about a hypothetical person.

With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals rely on them, and they may cause some stagnant actions while talking with others.


With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals have come to rely on them, and they may cause some stagnant actions while talking with others.

"have come to" expresses the idea that people are becoming reliant on tech.

With the development of electronic equipment, actually, a great number of individuals rely on them, and theytechnology, a many rely on it so it may cause some stagnant actiondifficulties while talspeaking with others.

So all the methods above will affect the result of the speaking ability of one individual.


So all the methods above will affect the result of the speaking ability of onean individual.

So all the methodsTherefore, all the above will affect the result of the speaking ability of oneany individual.

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