Aug. 9, 2023
Beidaihe is a beach in Bo Sea, which is an inland sea in Qinhuangdao city of Hebei province.
It is said that the leaders of the Chinese government get there every year in the first half of August to have a meeting discussing many very important issues about China, which makes Beidahe not only famous but also mysterious.
I took a high speed train from Beijing to here yesterday afternoon. When I got here, I had lunch first and asked some locals about which place was most deserving of a visit. They said that it was Heihushi Sea Park.
When I took a taxi arriving at the park, I saw many tourists on the beach. Some were basking in the sun, some were playing with sand and some were swimming in the sea.
It was hot then. Seeing them swimming in the sea, I couldn't wait to swim, but I hadn't prepared anything for swimming. I hesitated for a little while, and then I got into the sea.
Because I didn't have a lifebuoy, I just stayed near the sea shore where I could stand with my head above the water. I swam around for at least two hours and I was very excited. No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel cool as soon as you swim in the sea.
After swimming, I paid 20 CNY at a store on the beach to take a shower and change clothes, then I booked a hotel by the beach. From the window of my room in the hotel, I could see the beach and the sea closely and clearly. Of course, the room was extremely expensive.
Beidahe Beach
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Your original wording meant that the Bohai Sea was completely surrounded by the city of Qinhuangdao, like a lake in the city.
The Bohai Sea is not considered an inland sea because it opens directly into the Yellow Sea, like a very large bay of the Yellow Sea.
渤海 is called the Bohai Sea in English, even though “hai” and “sea” are semantically redundant.
Beidahe Beach
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No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel coolrefreshed as soon as you swim in the sea.
After swimming, I paid 20 CNY at a store on the beach to take a shower and change clothes, then I booked a hotel by the beach.
From the window of my room in the hotel room, I could see the nearby beach and the sea closely and clearly.
Of course, the room was extremely expensive.
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Beidahe Beach
Beidaihe is a beach in Bo Sea, whichit is an inland sea in the Qinhuangdao city of Hebei province.
It is said that the leaders of the Chinese government get there every year in the first half of August to have a meeting discussing many very important issues about China, which makes Beidahe not only famous but also mysterious.
I took a high speed train from Beijing to there yesterday afternoon.
When I got there, I had lunch first and asked some locals about which place was most deservingdeserves the most of a visit.
They said that it was the Heihushi Sea Park.
When I took a taxi arriving ato the park, I saw many tourists on the beach.
Some were basking in the sun, some were playing with sand and some were swimming in the sea.
It was hot then.
Seeing them swimming in the sea, I couldn't wait to swim, but I hadn't prepared anything for swimming.
I hesitated for a little while, and then I got into the seaswam.
Because I didn't have a lifebuoy, I just stayed near the sea shore where I could stand with my head above the water.
I swam around for at least two hours and I was very excited.
After swimming, I paid 20 CNY atin a store on the beach to take a shower and change clothes, then I booked a hotel by the beach.
From the window of my room in the hotel, I could see the beach and the sea closely and clearly.
Of course, the room was extremely expensive.
Beidaihe is a beach in Bo Sea, which is an inland sea in Qinhuangdao city ofin Hebei province.
It is said that the leaders of the Chinese government geto/gather there every year in the first half of August to have a meeting discussing many very important issues about China, which makes Beidahe not only famous but also mysterious.
"Get" emphasizes the arrival while "go" emphasizes the traveling part.
Ex: I'll phone you as soon as I get there / I'll phone you as soon as I arrive there
I took a high speed train from Beijing to here yesterday afternoon. / I traveled from Beijing to Beidahe yesterday afternoon on a high-speed train.
When I got here, I had lunch first (and) then asked some locals about which place was most deserving of a visit. / When I arrived, I first had lunch then asked some locals about which place I should visit first.
"Then" since there's a sequence
They said (that it was) Heihushi Sea Park.
When I took a taxi arrivingto go to the park, I saw many tourists on the beach. / When the taxi arrived at the park, I saw many tourists on the beach.
When you take a taxi, you're traveling in it to arrive at your destination
Some were basking in the sun, some were playing with sand, and some were swimming in the sea.
It was hot then.
Seeing them swimming in the sea, I couldn't wait to swim, but I hadn't prepared anything for swimming.
I hesitated for a little while, and then I gowent into the sea.
Because I didn't have a lifebuoy, I just stayed near the sea shore where I could stand with my head above the water.
I swam around for at least two hours and I was very excited.
No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel cool as soon as you swim into the sea.
After swimming, I paid 20 CNY at a store on the beach to take a shower and change clothes, then I booked a hotel by the beach.
From the window of my room in the hotel, I could see the beach and the sea closely and clearly. / From the window of my hotel room, I could clearly see the beach and the sea up close
Of course, the room was extremely expensive.
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I took a high speed train from Beijing to here yesterday afternoon. I took a high speed train from Beijing to here yesterday afternoon. / I traveled from Beijing to Beidahe yesterday afternoon on a high-speed train. I took a high speed train from Beijing to there yesterday afternoon. I took a high speed train from Beijing to |
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When I took a taxi arriving at the park, I saw many tourists on the beach. When I took a taxi When you take a taxi, you're traveling in it to arrive at your destination When I took a taxi
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Because I didn't have a lifebuoy, I just stayed near the sea shore where I could stand with my head above the water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel cool as soon as you swim in the sea. No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel cool as soon as you swim into the sea. No matter how hot the weather is, you will immediately feel |
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From the window of my room in the hotel, I could see the beach and the sea closely and clearly. From the window of my room in the hotel, I could see the beach and the sea closely and clearly. / From the window of my hotel room, I could clearly see the beach and the sea up close This sentence has been marked as perfect! From the window of my |
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