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Dec. 25, 2020

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The XX Century

If I could describe the XX century with just one word, I would choose "change".
The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, so radical that caused deep changes in each aspect of human life and the entire world.
Compared to the past, these changes succeeded so fast that make more complicated the historical background, and more difficult to interpret the events.
In the XX century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy and was replaced by the United States.
In the scientific and technology field there was an extraordinary development that modified all the aspects of life.
Even Italy, due to its strategic position, changed.
In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and World culture.
In this period, the linkage that Italy had with French literature was very strong and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular.

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Even Italy, due to its strategic position, changed.

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Even Italy, due to its strategic position, changed.

The XX Century


The XX20th Century The 20th Century

or you could write out "The Twentieth Century"

The XX20th Century The 20th Century

I know that in Spanish they use Roman numerals as well in order to denote the century, but I feel like this is fairly uncommon in English.

If I could describe the XX century with just one word, I would choose "change".


If I could describe the XX20th century with just one word, I would choose "change". If I could describe the 20th century with just one word, I would choose "change".

If I could describe the XX20th century with just one word, I would choose "change". If I could describe the 20th century with just one word, I would choose "change".

The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, so radical that caused deep changes in each aspect of human life and the entire world.


The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, which were so radical that they caused deepprofound changes in eachvery aspect of human life around the entire world. The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, which were so radical that they caused profound changes in every aspect of human life around the world.

Here are just a few minor corrections regarding word choice: - changes are more commonly described as 'profound' or 'significant' than as 'deep' - 'every aspect' is more typical than 'each aspect' - adding 'which were' makes it clearer that you are referring to the revolutionary ideas and events

The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, so radical that they caused deep changes in each and every aspect of human life, ands well as the entire world. The story of this century was extremely complex and full of revolutionary ideas and events, so radical that they caused deep changes in each and every aspect of human life, as well as the entire world.

Compared to the past, these changes succeeded so fast that make more complicated the historical background, and more difficult to interpret the events.


Compared to the past, these changes sucproceeded so fast that make morequickly, which complicated the historical background, and made it more difficult to interpret the events. Compared to the past, these changes proceeded so quickly, which complicated the historical background and made it more difficult to interpret the events.

It's not clear what you mean by 'complicated the historical background,' and how exactly you mean 'interpret the events.'

Compared to the past, these changes succeeded so fast that make moreoccurred at such as fast pace, which complicated the historical background even more, and moreade it difficult to interpret the events. Compared to the past, these changes occurred at such as fast pace, which complicated the historical background even more, and made it difficult to interpret the events.

In the XX century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy and was replaced by the United States.


In the XX20th century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy, and was replaced by the United States. In the 20th century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy, and was replaced by the United States.

In the XX20th century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy, and was replaced by the United States. In the 20th century, Europe lost its economic and political supremacy, and was replaced by the United States.

In the scientific and technology field there was an extraordinary development that modified all the aspects of life.


In the scientifice and technology field there was an extraordinary development that modifiaffected all the aspects of life. In science and technology there was extraordinary development that affected all aspects of life.

Although it's grammatically correct, it sounds a bit funny to say that some developments "modify" aspects of life. Modify is used more for concrete or physical things that are changed, for instance a plan can be modified or a mechanical device can be modified. In your sentence it would be more common to say that the developments "impacted," "affected," or "changed" all aspects of life. Also, to say "an extraordinary development" suggests there's one specific one you want to discusst. If you mean that science and technology developed more generally in extraordinary ways, then you would remove the word "an."

In the scientific and technologyical fields, there wasere an extraordinary developments that modified all the aspects of life. In the scientific and technological fields, there were an extraordinary developments that modified all aspects of life.

Even Italy, due to its strategic position, changed.


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In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and World culture.


In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and Wworld culture. In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and world culture.

In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and Wworld culture. In the 1900s, the Italian peninsula gradually opened up to European and world culture.

In this period, the linkage that Italy had with French literature was very strong and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular.


In this period, the linkageconnection that Italy had with French literature was very strong, and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular. In this period, the connection that Italy had with French literature was very strong, and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular.

In this period, the linkageconnection that Italy had with French literature wasbecame very strong and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular. In this period, the connection that Italy had with French literature became very strong and poets, such as D’Annunzio, Ungaretti, and Calvino, became popular.

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