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milkyway

Dec. 23, 2023

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Before Christmas

Before Christmas, I had a question that “Do muslims celebrate Christmas?”, so I looked up the Internet.
A columnist said, “Yes and no.” In the column, I learned a little about history of religion. It seems like there are various ways of thinking for religion.
He also said, “If people focus on the commonalities rather than the differences, we can get along.” I thought it was true.

In Japan, we often eat cakes and fried chickens at Christmas. When I watched the image of Christmas on a TV commercial, I wanted to eat them, so I ate pieces of strawberry sponge cake and some fried chickens from KFC.
Merry Christmas!


クリスマスを前に、「イスラム教ではクリスマスを祝うのか?」と言う疑問が湧いたので、少しネットで調べてみた。あるコラムニストが言うには「イエス&ノー」らしい。そのコラムで少しだけ宗教の歴史の勉強をした。いろいろな考え方があるそうな。その人が言うには、「違いではなく、共通点に目を向ければ、仲良くできる」らしい。確かになぁと思った。

日本では、クリスマスにケーキやフライドチキンを食べる事が多い。テレビCMで見て食べたくなったので、いちごショートケーキとケンタッキーフライドチキンを食べたよ。
メリークリスマス。

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Before Christmas

Before Christmas, I had a question that “Do mwondered whether Muslims celebrate Christmas?”, so I looked upit up on the Internet.

A columnist said, “Yes and no.” In the column, I learned a little about the history of religion.

It seems like there are various ways of thinking for religions.

He also said, “If people focus on the commonalities rather than the differences, we can get along.” I thought it was trueagreed.

This is a slightly more concise way.

In Japan, we often eat cakes and fried chickens at Christmas.

Fried chicken isn't usually made plural.

When I watched the image of Christmas imagery on a TV commercial, I wanted to eat them, so I ate pieces of strawberry sponge cake and some fried chickens from KFC.

Merry Christmas!

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Merry Christmas!
I didn't know about the tradition of eating fried chicken. In America, I think eating a roast ham is pretty common.

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milkyway

Dec. 28, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections.

Before Christmas


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Before Christmas, I had a question that “Do muslims celebrate Christmas?”, so I looked up the Internet.


Before Christmas, I had a question that “Do mwondered whether Muslims celebrate Christmas?”, so I looked upit up on the Internet.

A columnist said, “Yes and no.” In the column, I learned a little about history of religion.


A columnist said, “Yes and no.” In the column, I learned a little about the history of religion.

It seems like there are various ways of thinking for religion.


It seems like there are various ways of thinking for religions.

He also said, “If people focus on the commonalities rather than the differences, we can get along.” I thought it was true.


He also said, “If people focus on the commonalities rather than the differences, we can get along.” I thought it was trueagreed.

This is a slightly more concise way.

In Japan, we often eat cakes and fried chickens at Christmas.


In Japan, we often eat cakes and fried chickens at Christmas.

Fried chicken isn't usually made plural.

When I watched the image of Christmas on a TV commercial, I wanted to eat them, so I ate pieces of strawberry sponge cake and some fried chickens from KFC.


When I watched the image of Christmas imagery on a TV commercial, I wanted to eat them, so I ate pieces of strawberry sponge cake and some fried chickens from KFC.

Merry Christmas!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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