Dec. 21, 2021
It was quite hard at work.
I had a lot of things for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues.
Because my health became bad, I feel more tired.
In this case, I have got to sleep well for more healthier.
If not, I will be burnout, and everything will be annoying.
I don't want to do that.
Before Burnout
I had a lot of things to deal with for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues. / I had a lot of things to handle for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues.
Because my health becameis bad, I feelt more tired.
In this case, I have got to sleep well for moreto get healthier.
If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying.
I don't want to do that.
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Great job, you handled it well and got through the day! 잘 푹 쉬세요! :)
Before Burnout
It was quite hard at work.
I had a lot of things forto negotiatinge between teams, and I had to solve many issues.
I'm not sure what you meant here. Did you mean to say "I had to do a lot of things, like negotiating between teams, and solving many issues"?
Because my health became baworsened, I feel more tired.
If your health had already worsened before you came to work, you could say "Since my health had already worsened, I felt more tired afterwards." (I'm assuming the work is what made you tired)
In this case, I ha've got to sleep well for moreto get healthier.
If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying.
1. "burnout" is a noun, and "burnt out" is the adjective form. "burn out" is also a verb, like in "This workload is burning me out."
2. "everything will be annoying" sounds a little child-like, though it's not "wrong". You could say, "and everything will fall apart from there." (though that's a bit more extreme). Just "I'll get really annoyed" could also work.
That's something I don't want to do that.
"i don't want to do that" makes it sound like you becoming burnt out would be a choice. Although choosing to work more is a choice, most people would say getting burnt out isn't really a choice, so it sounds odd to say it like that. It's not wrong though, and I'm sure many natives might also use it.
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Nicely written. Just a few word choice mistakes, but grammar was pretty much spotless. Nice job :D
(And I wish you good luck on preventing burnout, work can be way too taxing x_x)
Because my health became bad, I feel more tired. Because my health If your health had already worsened before you came to work, you could say "Since my health had already worsened, I felt more tired afterwards." (I'm assuming the work is what made you tired) Because my health |
Before Burnout This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It was quite hard at work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I had a lot of things for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues. I had a lot of things I'm not sure what you meant here. Did you mean to say "I had to do a lot of things, like negotiating between teams, and solving many issues"? I had a lot of things to deal with for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues. / I had a lot of things to handle for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues. |
In this case, I have got to sleep well for more healthier. In this case, I In this case, I have got to sleep well |
If not, I will be burnout, and everything will be annoying. If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying. 1. "burnout" is a noun, and "burnt out" is the adjective form. "burn out" is also a verb, like in "This workload is burning me out." 2. "everything will be annoying" sounds a little child-like, though it's not "wrong". You could say, "and everything will fall apart from there." (though that's a bit more extreme). Just "I'll get really annoyed" could also work. If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying. |
I don't want to do that. That's something I don't wan "i don't want to do that" makes it sound like you becoming burnt out would be a choice. Although choosing to work more is a choice, most people would say getting burnt out isn't really a choice, so it sounds odd to say it like that. It's not wrong though, and I'm sure many natives might also use it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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